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I Hope You'Re Happy

I hope you're happy with everything you've achieved. How does it feel to know you absolutely destroyed someone? How does it feel knowing you tore down everything she worked so hard to build? Does it make you happy, knowing she looks in the mirror and questions why someone was so determined to ruin her? Does it thrill you to the core that you're the one that broke her? Not just her heart, but her body and mind. Do you find joy in the fact that you stole hers? When you moved, she flinched, unsure of whether you would be kind or cruel. When you spoke, she closed her eyes, knowing your words would cloud her eyes. When you hurled insults at her, she visibly shook, wondering when the verbal hurt would become physical. Your voice became toxic to her body. She broke herself trying to please you. She was never pretty enough, she was never right. She never listened, she never did a thing for you. You poisoned her view of herself and you made her believe she will never be good enough. God, I hope you're happy. I hope you're happy and free. Because she's broken and weak. And it's all because of you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/13/2017 4:39:00 PM
Well-written, Cheyenne... congrats on being featured+++++
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Date: 10/27/2016 2:47:00 PM
Cheyenne R,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/25/2016 3:41:00 PM
Cheyenne,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/20/2016 10:27:00 PM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath.........
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