Eileen Manassian Poet Quatrain

I Hope You Suffer

I hope one day you suffer
I hope one day you burn
I hope  one day you pay
For the love you have spurned

I hope you feel the torment
I hope you feel jagged thorn
I hope that you long to die
As in sackcloth black you mourn

I hope you feel less than dirt
I hope you twist with such pain
I hope betrayal drives you
Stark raving mad and insane

I hope one day you're haunted
I hope in terror you scream
I hope at nighttime you see
A nightmare in place of dream

I hope one day SOON you bleed
With a spear thrust in your side
Wounded for killing my love
Your soul not able to hide

Yes, it may be pure evil
It may be a heinous crime
But for my heart's rejection
I hope you get to do time

Yes, I hope that you suffer
I hope that you wail and weep
It will soothe my aching heart
That you didn’t want to keep

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Liam Mcdaid October 14, 2013 at 1:43 PM powerful piece of writing excellent piece

Arthur Vaso October 13, 2013 at 9:31 PM Wow WOW Wow, Well done and I also give you a hug!!!!

Richard D Seal October 13, 2013 at 6:05 PM I likes this, can hear you screaaming this at some poor unfortunate guy lol, I think you've typed 'you' instead of 'one' in the third line, see, I take in every word you write. Take care, Richard

Charmaine Chircop October 13, 2013 at 4:44 PM Ow gee sometimes when im very angry i sound so much like your verse but then when I calm down I see things differently.This is very deep.Lets roar girl and scare the lion away..big smile : )

Ilene Bauer October 13, 2013 at 4:35 PM wow! i'd hate to be on the receiving end of this! you've gotten a lot of your anger out here, though, which is a great place to do so...

Just That Archaic Poet October 13, 2013 at 9:35 AM Wow. I could clearly and distinctly feel the scorn and enmity you are conveying here. Very strong, spiteful and venomous; I can absolutely relate to these feelings. Great job articulating your malice! Kudos :) Eileen Manassian October 13, 2013 at 1:58 PM Wow! Malice...pretty strong word. I would say it was just a hope that the person gets a taste of his own medicine. But...You call it as you see it. Thanks for dropping by.

Andrea Dietrich October 13, 2013 at 9:04 AM yep, I would say a lot of us feel that way when rejected. ME LIKES Eileen Manassian October 13, 2013 at 1:59 PM Thanks, dear Andrea. Glad that you have saved me from being seen as a monster. I think these are natural feelings. How we deal with them is completely another matter. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen October 13, 2013 at 8:39 AM - Yes, there is a lot of pain in this poem Eileen ..... power full written! - All the best to you dear friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Eileen Manassian October 13, 2013 at 2:00 PM Thanks, Sunshine. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Pain lets us know we are still alive and alerts us to trouble, so....I guess we can't live without it. Hugs

Russell Sivey October 13, 2013 at 6:48 AM I can feel your pain with every word within this tremendous write my friend! Wow, the power behind your lines is so amazing I can surely feel your heartache! I loved reading this awesome poem this morning Eileen! What a glorious piece, Great Work! Eileen Manassian October 13, 2013 at 2:01 PM Thanks, Russell....being able to empathize is a very beautiful thing. Hugs

Honestly J.T. October 13, 2013 at 1:43 AM A poem of passion and angst. Well written Eileen Manassian October 13, 2013 at 2:03 PM Justice, you bring me joy