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I Hope For Sweets This Valentine's Day

My dear can we somehow meet in the middle Our eyes say yes, and our hearts say yes Yet the river of life is rapidly going by With no waterfall in sight It would be nice if we could stream as one In that golden pond under sunny skies Us, two swans swimming in harmony In the past, we were like two playful ducks That duck, fight and quack For that last morsel of food on the ground It's like we enjoy needling each other Can the weather change for the better Between us and especially between our hangups I see that Valentine's is right behind the corner There could be a cupid's arrow between us We'll never know if Jack and Jill went up the hill Can you please answer my call And be my Valentine once and for all 12/28/22 Valentine Gift Card Creation Poetry Contest Sponsor-Bobby May

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Date: 1/7/2023 12:21:00 PM
I like how you used the resemblance of both you and the person to which the letter is for. I enjoyed reading your Valentine Card. Congratulations on your win in Bobby's contest. Have a blessed day my friend
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Date: 1/6/2023 8:56:00 PM
A very beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/28/2022 11:57:00 AM
Refreshingly different imagery in your Valentine’s plea … enjoyed:)
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 12/28/2022 4:52:00 PM
Thank you.

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