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I Hold Three Magic Rocks

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     Silence surrounds me and sounds awaken me,
Incense burning, drifting, and candles softly flickering;
               The flute of the Spirit Dreamer in the background,
And in my palm, I hold three magic rocks, rolling them over and over.

     And I am floating, up and up and away,
I wear a lavender, gauzy gown so filigree and delicate;
               My raven hair tangled and billowing about my body,
A blue meandering river flows below me slowly representing my journey.

     Images of my past existences lay beyond the surface,
Floating back and back and back into the past, into oblivion;
               Like a fallen leaf, spinning, twirling and swirling in the wind,
Backwards through the tattered, yellowed and decaying pages of a time past.

     In a forest lush and green with thick rambling foliage,
Bird calls fill the misty dawn light where the falling dew drips;
                And on my arm held up, ornate bracelets sparkle in the sun,
And in my hand a dagger is poised, waiting breathlessly, anticipating the kill.

     An ancient ship rolls on the blue undulating ocean waves,
Dappled light fills a small cabin within the dipping and rolling ship;
               There a man holds me with love and places his lips upon mine,
As our ship crashes on jagged rocks of a distant shore and sinks into the abyss.

     A horse, white as a cloud sleek and strong, gallops swiftly,
In the thick black of inky night with the moon and the stars shining;
                The thunder of many horse hoofs beating behind, in pursuit,
And we turn, my horse and I, sword held high and attack the enemy with pride.

                 And in my palm I hold three magic rocks . . . .




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August 1, 2013

Poetry/Verse/I Hold Three Magic Rocks
Copyright Protected, ID 08-496-354-01
All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France

Submitted to the Standard contest, Any Old Poem #5, 
sponsor, Skat, Judged 2013

Fifth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Wolf Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 7:04 PM
You are very talented and spiritual Broken wings... whenever I read of the ocean I think of the subconscious and the ship floating just above, but in yours, you sink down into that void. Whether you meant this or not, that's my spin on it I guess, we all read different things and meanings. I enjoyed this immensely...love Budgie. /|\
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July 5, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Wonderful pen BW ,, congrats on ur win!
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July 5, 2015 at 3:15 AM
Broken, congratulations. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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July 4, 2015 at 7:46 PM
Broken :) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. LOVE SKAT :)
Gasun Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 5:21 AM
A stunning piece which really deserved its super win! CONGRATULATIONS my dear friend, Wings! (Broken Wings?) ;)) I can remember you;)) And since somebody sent me a message, i'm passing it to you, Happy Friendship Day! Big sweet hugs! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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August 4, 2013 at 10:02 PM
:-) Congratulations, nice winning list... goodnight~ Linda
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August 4, 2013 at 5:03 PM
your poem is awesome...SKAT
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August 4, 2013 at 12:51 PM
- Nice to read this poem, it deserved a first place B.W.! - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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