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~~~ Silence surrounds me and sounds awaken me, Incense burning, drifting, and candles softly flickering; The flute of the Spirit Dreamer in the background, And in my palm, I hold three magic rocks, rolling them over and over. And I am floating, up and up and away, I wear a lavender, gauzy gown so filigree and delicate; My raven hair tangled and billowing about my body, A blue meandering river flows below me slowly representing my journey. Images of my past existences lay beyond the surface, Floating back and back and back into the past, into oblivion; Like a fallen leaf, spinning, twirling and swirling in the wind, Backwards through the tattered, yellowed and decaying pages of a time past. In a forest lush and green with thick rambling foliage, Bird calls fill the misty dawn light where the falling dew drips; And on my arm held up, ornate bracelets sparkle in the sun, And in my hand a dagger is poised, waiting breathlessly, anticipating the kill. An ancient ship rolls on the blue undulating ocean waves, Dappled light fills a small cabin within the dipping and rolling ship; There a man holds me with love and places his lips upon mine, As our ship crashes on jagged rocks of a distant shore and sinks into the abyss. A horse, white as a cloud sleek and strong, gallops swiftly, In the thick black of inky night with the moon and the stars shining; The thunder of many horse hoofs beating behind, in pursuit, And we turn, my horse and I, sword held high and attack the enemy with pride. And in my palm I hold three magic rocks . . . . ______________________________ August 1, 2013 Poetry/Verse/I Hold Three Magic Rocks Copyright Protected, ID 08-496-354-01 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, Any Old Poem #5, sponsor, Skat, Judged 2013 Fifth Place

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Date: 10/7/2016 7:04:00 PM
You are very talented and spiritual Broken wings... whenever I read of the ocean I think of the subconscious and the ship floating just above, but in yours, you sink down into that void. Whether you meant this or not, that's my spin on it I guess, we all read different things and meanings. I enjoyed this immensely...love Budgie. /|\
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Date: 7/5/2015 8:52:00 AM
Wonderful pen BW ,, congrats on ur win!
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Date: 7/5/2015 3:15:00 AM
Broken, congratulations. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/4/2015 7:46:00 PM
Broken :) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. LOVE SKAT :)
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Date: 8/5/2013 5:21:00 AM
A stunning piece which really deserved its super win! CONGRATULATIONS my dear friend, Wings! (Broken Wings?) ;)) I can remember you;)) And since somebody sent me a message, i'm passing it to you, Happy Friendship Day! Big sweet hugs! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 8/4/2013 10:02:00 PM
:-) Congratulations, nice winning list... goodnight~ Linda
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Date: 8/4/2013 5:03:00 PM
your poem is awesome...SKAT
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Date: 8/4/2013 12:51:00 PM
- Nice to read this poem, it deserved a first place B.W.! - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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