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I Hold a Rose You Gave Me

"I hold a rose you gave me" I hold a rose you gave me happiness fills with reflection on that one fine gentle day looking back I feel what I felt dancing in your arms carrying love amazingly passion grew and bloomed resting on the wings of a butterfly only we inherit this wind of desire soaring with the sun and moon above forever holding a rose of love to mold SkyWatcher 05-10-23

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/10/2023 11:15:00 PM

You handle fantasy with imagination.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/11/2023 3:15:00 AM

Good Afternoon Victor. Hi. Thank you Thank you. Coming from you I am honored. Truly. I was actually trying to practice the Acrostic Format as well. Have a beautiful and peaceful afternoon. May it be all things good. Love and Blessings now and always. (smile)

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/10/2023 8:12:00 PM

Yes, Lisa! This is love and this is poetry:) Lovely!

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/11/2023 3:21:00 AM

Top of the Morning Daniel. Hi. Words can not express such a comment and review. I still have much to learn regarding the written word and expressions of poetry but I keep trying. I consider myself to be a better reader than writer so I can always spot poetry a mile away (smile). Also I continue to write of romance because I consider love to be one of the heartbeats of poetry. Have a beautiful morning and day. Keep enjoying poetry even if it is for yourself and your soul. Blessings always (smile and thank you)