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I Have Swam Enough

i will stop the tears
   this time won’t be a river
     i have swam enough

Heidi Sands

12/28/18

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Gershon Wolf

December 30, 2018 at 6:27 PM

Yes, enough tears are enough. Wishing you joy in the days, weeks, months, and years ahead! :) gw

Heidi Sands

December 30, 2018 at 6:35 PM

Thank you so much Gershon :)

Vijay Pandit

December 28, 2018 at 5:06 PM

Great haiku..especially that last line.

Heidi Sands

December 28, 2018 at 5:17 PM

Thank you Vijay! :)

Wren Rushing

December 28, 2018 at 4:03 PM

Well said Heidi! Have a wonderful New Year my dear friend.

Heidi Sands

December 28, 2018 at 4:18 PM

Thank you very much Wren. I hope that you have a happy and peaceful New Year! :)

Chris Green

December 28, 2018 at 3:59 PM

Sad but strong my friend.

Heidi Sands

December 28, 2018 at 4:17 PM

Thank you very much Chris :)

M. L. Kiser

December 28, 2018 at 3:53 PM

Very short and sweet; well done.

Heidi Sands

December 28, 2018 at 3:56 PM

Thank you very much M.L. :)

Mike Gentile

December 28, 2018 at 3:11 PM

Yes, it time Heidi and to start a new year fresh!!! Happy New Year xxoo

Heidi Sands

December 28, 2018 at 3:13 PM

Yes, I am excited for the New Year. Thank you Mike. I appreciate your comment and all your support! Happy New Year :)

Nette Onclaud

December 28, 2018 at 2:48 PM

ohh, such a commanding write, heidi... really good 'ku!...no more tears... huggs

Heidi Sands

December 28, 2018 at 3:05 PM

Thank you Nette. Tears are cleansing, but there are times, when you just have to stop them :) I appreciate your comment very much!

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