I Have a Feeling

I have a feeling I will eventually get where I need to go
To where it is I am supposed to be
Though, like a butterfly reeling on the wind
At the mercy of the will of life
On this migration
From first light and breath
Until at last the body fails

I suffer every day beneath the skin
For humanity
My heart like a tin can rattles endlessly
Against its prison of ribs

We are born wounded
Mentally 
Physically
Spiritually
Honestly, wounded
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 11/13/2016 1:53:00 PM
Wonderful Poem .... I love these lines: "My heart like a tin can rattles endlessly Against its prison of ribs" Kurt
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Date: 10/20/2016 9:07:00 AM
This was very deep, and I can relate in so so many ways. Beautiful
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Jeff Davies
Date: 10/20/2016 8:30:00 PM
Thank you for reading Sofia. That is very nice of you to say.
Date: 10/11/2016 5:50:00 PM
Hi Jeff, You have penned a well crafted poem. It flowed in content and good imagery. I agree we were born "wounded" , however I must stay optimistic for a better tomorrow for us all. Well done. Thanks for visiting my page:-) Alexis
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Jeff Davies
Date: 10/11/2016 6:11:00 PM
Thanks for the nice feedback Alexis.
Date: 9/15/2016 11:31:00 PM
WELL DONE, JEFF. SKAT
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Jeff Davies
Date: 9/16/2016 4:52:00 PM
Thanks very much
Date: 9/14/2016 5:47:00 PM
I love the imagery in the poem, especially the prison of ribs. I really liked the poem. Andy
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Jeff Davies
Date: 9/15/2016 4:31:00 AM
Thanks a lot for commenting, glad you enjoyed it
Date: 9/13/2016 5:12:00 PM
Thanks for reading my poem Linda
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Date: 9/13/2016 3:49:00 PM
Thank you for sharing Jeff. LINDA
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Date: 9/13/2016 3:39:00 AM
I love the free flow. As an optimists, it gives me hope.
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Jeff Davies
Date: 9/13/2016 4:35:00 AM
Thank you that's great to hear
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