I Hate You

You always smile at me
You always shine with glee
I think you’ve hinted
But so far, my heart is tinted.

You swore to me
You promised don’t you see?
You wouldn’t break my heart
But it was just a part.

You let me get so close
But when I try 
You have a shell
I cant pierce through.

Should I keep pushing?
Or are you just like the rest?
Will you love me for 1 day
Then throw my heart away?
Like any old toy.
You should know I don’t enjoy
The way you make me feel.

I hate the way you always laugh
And why you do this to me
I hate the way you I cant rely
When you play this love game
Just for some useless fame.


You express in a way I can’t understand
Like all you say is planned
And you know,
I hate you so much
That I can’t help 
Falling in love with you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/11/2016 1:17:00 PM
Ileana, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/21/2015 3:43:00 PM
Ileana,, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT"
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Date: 1/21/2010 5:09:00 AM
The last three lines says it all. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 10/13/2009 5:01:00 AM
I feel the pain in your words...your poetry... walk away... a person who causing you such pain is not worth it... somewhere there is someone who will bring only complete love to your life.. leave this one behind... you can do it... for your words have strength.. your words are powerful
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