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I Hate Sand

It starts real slow Just one little speck Then more and more Soon it's up to your neck So you drudge through the sand Day in and day out Life's struggle gets harder Your head filled with doubt Unsure what to do With the time you have left You start to feel anxious From the thoughts of your death So you stay in your room But know it can't last Because the sand's almost out In your life's hourglass

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Date: 6/15/2016 4:06:00 AM
i read it coz i was curious as to why you hate sand. now i know . its a great write
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Tomas Vazquez
Date: 6/22/2016 7:40:00 AM
Haha thank you! But really though, sand gets everywhere and tastes really bad on sandwiches.
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Tomas Vazquez
Date: 6/22/2016 7:40:00 AM
Haha thank you! But really though, sand gets everywhere and tastes really bad on sandwiches.