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I Hate Me

You let me love you

You really shouldn’t Babe
I am very insane
Just a typical crave

    I’ve made you my creature
    Keeper of your darkest secrets 
    Those unshaven hairs revealed

Looking down upon you
Your soft snore, sleeping
My delightful monkey

    You’re my sweet love
    You’re filled with me
    My DNA

I have pumped you full
Until you look like me
How can I leave you?

    If someone bothered you
    I would gladly kill them
    If a girl tempted me

I’d pretend to love her

I hate me

© Copyright G. Jones 2008

Copyright © Gary Jones | Year Posted 2008

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Janetta Harrington Date: 3/2/2009 8:05:00 AM you hate yourself because you are human??? thhis makes me think. i like it. not only a good write but a thoughtful one and well expressed. janetta. Login to Reply

Janetta Harrington Date: 10/8/2008 10:35:00 PM i love your poem. the way you arrange it and i see the suffering you are doing to just try to hate yourself. you either love some one or you don't. the clincher is that little life left behind with your dna. again, a beautiful piece. janetta Login to Reply

Lena Townsend Date: 6/14/2008 10:52:00 PM Such strong emotion. You express well the torment of temptation and anger. I hope that you don't really hate you as we love your writing here at the soup. Your words here are dripping with the drama of a writers mind and the passion of a writers heart. Thank you for sharing. Smiles from Lena "Lolita" Login to Reply