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I Hate Holiday Packing

Do I know what to pack – that answer is never
Depends on my mood and also the weather

Two pairs of jeans and three summer dresses
A new skort but I won’t wear it she confesses 

Nightdress and socks and four t shirt tops
If I run out of clothes I’ll go to the shops

Sandals and shoes and my trusty old slippers
Mustn’t forget to take my new pairs of knickers

Wash bag and toothbrush and cream for my face
Gosh I’m surprised there was room in my case

Jan Allison
8th August 2014

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Robin Davis Date: 8/15/2014 8:38:00 AM Jan This is a cleverly humorous write. You made a very hard task into a funny and amusing poem. Thank you for the wonderful comment on my Super Powers poem. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/15/2014 8:41:00 AM Thanks as ever for dropping by Robin I do so appreciate you comments:-) Hugs jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 8/10/2014 1:40:00 AM Hahahha like the funny way you did it a Jan..:) Weee your writes never fail to put a smile on my face..:) very girly!hugs hugs and hugs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/10/2014 5:31:00 AM Thanks Olive I do try and put humour into my writes as much as I can:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Ilene Bauer Date: 8/8/2014 7:58:00 PM i totally agree with you, jan! i also hate packing and never end up bringing the right stuff even after all that i go through... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/8/2014 8:02:00 PM Same here - the dresses remained in the wardrobe LOL - trouble is you cant rely on the British weather so have to pack for every eventuality LOL:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith Date: 8/8/2014 4:28:00 PM lol....sounds fun...don't forget anything...hugs Tim Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/8/2014 4:35:00 PM I did forget to take teabags with me this time LOL - can't do without 'proper' tea when I go away - got a note in my case for when we go to Malta LOL. Have an awesome time baking and enjoy your family time - I await some choc chip cookies LOL Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance Date: 8/8/2014 3:54:00 PM I hate packing! Oh I always just say screw it and buy what I need when I get there. Just remember it never all fits right once you take it back out again Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/8/2014 3:59:00 PM Oh I found that Casarah i bought two big boxes of biscuits as presents - struggled to get everything back in the case - amazing how many 'bits' you accumulate in a few short days LOL - I always over pack and don't wear half of what I've taken LOL. Hugs Jan xxx