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I Hate Beginnings

I hate beginnings, plenipotentiary prattle, use- less sedimentary-sounds. A preface and first chap- ter betwixt the suc- culent kiss, the marvelous mystery unfolding. wash your hands, bobbleheaded-yes. that was the third part. typhoid mary, not important to this quiz, yet she opened the door and peaked through. i slammed it shut, rolled my eyes. how yummy pages that jump into the deep end and we drown in ecstasy’s eaglet nest. eggs cracking cuckoos collaborating. long, drawn………..out beginnings not for me the setup goes on and on and oh kind of like this steam letting off done 1/22/2021

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Date: 1/23/2021 4:04:00 AM
The way your mind traveled onto a page zinged me a bit. It was like listening to your muses arguing. "wash your hands, bobbleheaded-yes. that was the third part. typhoid mary, "Wow! You really let yourselves go here, Kim. WOW!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/23/2021 10:30:00 AM
Thank you, Caren! I want to see those bobbleheads roll ;)
Date: 1/22/2021 9:13:00 AM
I wonder how you survived the Bush Presidencies... After all that beating around the bush. lol. ~ Fire, Aim, Ready
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/23/2021 10:30:00 AM
LOL! We need the fiery bush! The great I AM!
Date: 1/22/2021 9:09:00 AM
Once I wrote a Maltese novel and began with the ending. It was not a success, alas. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2021 9:15:00 AM
LOL! The ending can work only if there is a great secondary story! <3
Date: 1/22/2021 8:18:00 AM
I know the feeling, you feel like shouting just get on with it lol. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2021 9:03:00 AM
I know! Weave those pretty details in somewhere else...lol
Date: 1/22/2021 7:01:00 AM
I relate to this Kim. :) Eggs cracking and cuckoos collaborating - perfect!! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2021 7:13:00 AM
Thank you, Linda! Hugs!

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