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unnatural can never be natural according to the Word 

A civilised mind has become the gem that glues this broken mould together it can identify each piece putting it properly in place of origin with the perfect picture hate attacks colouring around normal Attacking the source that painted this masterpiece vandalising the canvas criminal every alteration of the law drawn from the book of Wisdom direct approval of this deeply disturbing alteration carries a penalty sell your soul to the highest bidder right or wrong is where loyalty sits A tale of two paths where knowledge talks to the fool are you the ancestor of the ape or man this fence divides whom do you follow when you twist the truth with lies

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Date: 7/6/2022 3:54:00 PM
Much depth you convey, Liam. Splendid evocative vocabulary that makes one pause and think ---A tale of two paths where knowledge talks to the fool ...
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 7/11/2022 4:03:00 PM
thank you deeply for the wonderful comment, certainly is a tale of two paths smiling I pray you have a blessed week once again a heartfelt thanks
Date: 7/4/2022 4:09:00 PM
Thought provoking.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 7/11/2022 3:58:00 PM
thank you kindly for your delightful comment bless you

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