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I Guess It Could Be

~ I sit here watching the rain fall from dark grey clouds wondering if the sky might be crying for us… As I think back to what we were, our times kissing in a rain just like this an unopened umbrella and both becoming drenched in our feelings for one another The plans we made for quiet Sunday mornings lying in bed gazing into each other’s eyes, arms wrapped tightly as a new sun rose while we were lost in deep affection I picture the desires we shared, our dreams of those late nights, an empty office a sleepy city skyline, silhouettes on the evening as we learned what true love meant in breathless encounters Our song, we could sing it by heart Each word in perfect harmony with you and me How we believed it was written for us and it probably was The love, I still feel that love and always will, a love beyond anything else A love we both agreed was more than we had ever felt before, twin flames, soul mates, a perfect love…now ended And I sit here watching the rain fall from dark grey clouds wondering if the sky might be crying for us… I guess it could be

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Date: 10/17/2016 4:51:00 AM
A love as such, never really truly ends, indulges the heart for a lifetime. Pathos is palpable Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/17/2016 8:17:00 AM
Yeah it seems to linger on for a very long time if not forever and that is the saddest part of all. Thanks so very much Paloma for always leaving such wonderful comments for me.
Date: 10/15/2016 2:37:00 PM
Beautifully sad, even the sad writes are spectacular, well done, sorry for your loss if this is not fictional.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/17/2016 8:16:00 AM
Thanks so much John. I appreciate your kind words on my poem. I usually write what I am feeling at the moment and the sadness is genuine.
Date: 10/14/2016 5:02:00 PM
A beautiful love you had. Cherish every memory.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/14/2016 5:22:00 PM
Thanks Tim, but I wish I could just forget, it would be easier.
Date: 10/14/2016 4:34:00 PM
Another one, so nice, so meaningful!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/14/2016 4:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Heidi.

Book: Shattered Sighs