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I Guess I Was Sick

When young to keep my illness at bay I had to eat some dirt everyday It sure tasted bad But I was real glad My older brother told me the way!

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/16/2018 8:15:00 AM

Good one, siblings will tell you anything when young.

Pat Adams
Date: 12/17/2018 6:14:00 PM

True enough! Thank you for commentin M.L...........80)

CayCay Jennings

Date: 12/12/2018 7:55:00 AM

Did we share big brothers? Delightfully cute and witty. All the best ... CayCay

Pat Adams
Date: 12/12/2018 2:44:00 PM

Thank you so much! ............. pat

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/5/2018 9:21:00 PM

So cute, Pat - but I sure hope that older brother eventually toned down his sense of humor. You sure took it well. LOL

Pat Adams
Date: 12/6/2018 8:13:00 AM

Looking back is easier than the original experience!....80)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/5/2018 8:19:00 PM

G'day Pat … we learn well from older siblings so we can pass it onto our younger ones - a nice little chuckle here - Lindsay

Pat Adams
Date: 12/6/2018 8:12:00 AM

Yeah, it's a lot funnier happening to someone else!!...............pat

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/5/2018 7:13:00 PM

ha! this is adorable, pat!

Pat Adams
Date: 12/6/2018 8:11:00 AM

Thanks Ilene!!..........80)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/5/2018 6:47:00 PM

lol a bit of dirt never hurt us when we were younger Pat:-) hugs Jan xx

Pat Adams
Date: 12/6/2018 8:11:00 AM

I guess not, if I lived to be this old!!!!!............80)