Emma Mantle Poet Quatrain

I Grieve a Dream

You are the tear that follows me
the ache within my soul
the bitter-sweet that sings to me
my heart you came and stole

You are a dream beyond my reach
a wish I can not touch
it breaks my heart to be so close
for I love you far too much

You are a kiss I can't make real
a whisper never spoken
a cherished thought that stays asleep
a smile lying broken

You are the one I can not have 
no matter how it pains
my dream for which I sit and grieve
a shadow that remains

You are the sun that has to set
our time just couldn't last
I need to wait for the dawn to break
while I mourn for is past.

'1st poem on poetry soup contest'
6th place

Brian strand's 'One off contest'
1st place

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Steven Cooke July 22, 2011 at 1:32 AM another gem, been there, theres beauty in sadness.

Steven Cooke July 21, 2011 at 5:23 AM wow, so moving

John Castro July 2, 2011 at 3:27 AM from the heart emma its always from the heart and i can tell 7up

Carol Sunshine Brown June 30, 2011 at 5:11 AM A belated congratulations Emma on your win in Brian Strand's "One Off" contest. Love, Carol

Kash Poet June 20, 2011 at 7:57 PM An absolute gem!Congrats on your win Emma.

Joyce Johnson June 19, 2011 at 11:06 AM Very nice work Emma. One question. Why do you use the small i instead of he proper pronoun? I am from the era when that would have earned me a D in English and it still shocks me. Love, Joyce

Johnny Sumler June 18, 2011 at 7:51 AM Talk about "titles"...wow! This is a tear-jerker masterpiece!I am so thankful you commented on my poem giving me introduction into your world of poetry. You have a gallery of titles I can't wait to read... : ) johnny

Andrea Dietrich June 17, 2011 at 9:46 PM Emma,I absolutely love this. Congratulations, a real fave for me!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 17, 2011 at 6:20 AM Congrats Emma on your first place win in this contest with another excellent entry luv.. enjoy..

Elizabeth Wesley June 13, 2011 at 10:22 AM Just beautiful Emma, you describe so eloquently the way it often goes. Thanks for visiting me.....Elizabeth

Bob Quigley June 13, 2011 at 9:25 AM Wow. Great. I could feel the emotion. If you opened your shirt, your heart would fall out. Very enjoyable read. Like your style.

David Williams June 13, 2011 at 4:53 AM this is just great, i love it, thanks for your kind words. David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 12, 2011 at 4:11 PM ah unrequited luv Emma is so hard on a person's emotional state .. these are very touching words u penned from the depth of your heart and soul.. luv it.. my friend..

Poet Destroyer A June 12, 2011 at 10:27 AM A deep line~ you are a kiss i can't make real. wow! Sad but with true beauty to every verse... Thanks for sharing,..p.d.

Michael J. Falotico June 12, 2011 at 5:19 AM Very good entry, our words tell a story we all know..... well written my dear...Michael

Anthony Nutter June 12, 2011 at 4:27 AM Reads and flows so well, excellent write. http://www.amazon.com/dp/B0052U4O5U

Ravi Sathasivam June 12, 2011 at 4:14 AM Beautiful wordings. Well penned.