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I Got To Say Adios

(I am inspired to write this poem by three Hollywood Movies (1)* The movie: Art of crying
(2)** The Cruel Intentions II (3)*** Julienne Moore starer (I don't remember the 
name of the movie)





                                               Hola
                               I am Ram Mehta, I am going
                        To say adios to this damn,..damn da..
                  To the world of Movies where cars are houses 
               Houses are storehouses….fed up with this life style
            I am going to say adios to     that world where the boy
          Friends, girl-friends
                                     Friends of all types and kinds are easily
     Avaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiii l a    b   l   e
                                                                    just for asking only

 BUT but but buttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
                                                            Batteries       not      included 
I am going to say adios to that worlddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
Where the 
                Girls
                          Are  looking for fun, but.. But…what should I say yay
"Batterries to be recharged."
I am going to say adios to that world where a son is enamoured of his 
  Own..own, (I am shamed to say, O.K. will write,)              “mother” 
    And …………….
                        And               …………And   a father seeks his own
          Damn  (I got to write)    hhhhhh “Own daughter” in bed     
             Still shameful is… An unmarried girl wants a child of 
                Her own, her mother takes her to the city to get
                   Pregnant   like …likekkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkke                                                  
                            A shepherd takes the cows to the 
                                                BULL.
                                           Adieu  Adieu 
                                                Adieu


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March 18, 2014
Form : Concrete
Dr. Ram Mehta
First Place Win
Contest: Danger by Sheri Fresonke Harper

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/29/2014 4:36:00 PM
Dr. , CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN..... Awesome poem!! Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/27/2014 5:20:00 AM
you are a very terrific poet, Dr. Ram!
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Date: 3/25/2014 11:37:00 PM
I can see how passionately angered you are by this life style and rightly so, Dr. Ram. Great shape you took with it. That one line likekkkkkkk looks like it needs to be centered. then it will be perfect. And I see you got a top win. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/23/2014 3:37:00 PM
i like seeing something different from you and with substance at that, dr.ram.. sweet congrats and huggs!
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Date: 3/23/2014 3:37:00 PM
i lile seeing something different from you and with substance at that, dr.ram.. sweet congrats and huggs!
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Date: 3/22/2014 10:46:00 PM
What a great piece,,Congrats on the win
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Date: 3/22/2014 9:29:00 PM
Thanks, Sheri, for my placement
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Date: 3/22/2014 9:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dr. Ram, great way to say adieu, and fly away. Like your form and poem.
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Date: 3/22/2014 8:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram
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Date: 3/22/2014 7:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Ram... This is very creative in appearance and the words do make the difference... Verlena
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Date: 3/19/2014 12:15:00 AM
I believe "namaste" is the equivalent of "hola" or "adios". The shape of this presentation reminds me of a hot air balloon. Good work Dr. Ram.
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 3/19/2014 1:11:00 AM
Namaste is equivalent of Holla or hello. yiu're right, roberrt
Date: 3/18/2014 3:06:00 PM
Really inspiring write. I was taken by not only the words, but format and layout ! xx~Xx
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Date: 3/18/2014 12:25:00 PM
this is AAAAAWWWWEEEESSSOOOMMMMEEE!!!!!! ....YEAH, Dr. RaM, you are a poet guru... :")) ...your words are unique, the stlye, the depth of its knowledge... it's an honor to have known you.. ^__^ APPLAUSE!!! ^__^
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