Charles Reese Poet Quatern

I Give You All

I give you all my Life dear Lord
O yes, I give you everything
I give you all my hopes and dreams
Because in you my heart now sings

Because you mean so much to me
I give you all my life dear Lord
You are the way the truth I see
I know you are the Living Word

It is your word that cuts so deep
To expose what should not be
I give you all my life dear Lord
So I can be so truly free

No other one can offer joy
Just like you have in store for me
I'll do my best to hear well done
I give you all my life dear Lord

Entered in a A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE' Contest on 5/26/2022

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Eve Roper May 27, 2022 at 10:45 AM Well done verse of praise and prayer. Thank you ,Charles, for the correction.. I wasn't paying attention, just trying to hurry. Eve Roper May 28, 2022 at 6:16 AM Thank you again, Charles, this is the Pantoum form, and I am totally spacing it again especially for a contest ...Thank you... I am 71 and realizing I need to stay focused. Charles Reese May 27, 2022 at 9:08 PM Thank you for review. I'm glad you took my suggestion, but you only did it to one line. You should fix the repeating line as well.

Andrea Dietrich May 27, 2022 at 9:33 AM Inspiring poem. I love the form you used. Charles Reese May 27, 2022 at 9:04 PM Thank you, I love this style it is so easy to write in it.