Honestly J.T. Poet Lyric

I Give Up

God, a whole lot of me,
Every single part of me,
Wants to say a prayer.
At the same time,
Today or tonight,
I'd ask,
If you're there;
Because sometimes,
My heart's desires,
Don't seem,
To be anywhere;
My made mistakes,
Of the other day,
They're known,
By those over there.
As I spend time,
Still trying to find,
Someone,
To love and care,
What answer will come?
Though I've messed up,
What for me is spared?

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Funom Makama October 30, 2015 at 7:06 AM This is lovely and great! I miss your work my dear poet. Refreshing... so refreshing!!

Angie Thomas September 24, 2015 at 6:16 AM Someday when you're least expecting it...The solutions to your problems will appear out of the blue....have faith :) But, on a lighter note....This is a pretty good poem :)

Nette Onclaud September 9, 2015 at 3:23 PM hauntingly sad and so beautifully essayed, honeslty.. you are not alone.. huggs

Eileen Manassian September 7, 2015 at 1:06 PM This is sad, JT. I'm sorry you are going through pain. I'm sure he has the best one for you. You need to wait...and be patient. Hugs

Michael Tor September 7, 2015 at 12:20 AM Honestly my friend he has his plan. Trust him he knows whats best for you. Patience brings knowledge don't rush into anything. Always be patient. You will make better decisions and when you rush it's easier to make mistakes. Excellent write full of truth.