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I Give In

Notoriously nasty.. you can have me like that knives take me back over lapped counter act Serenity You want me to strut let you cut oh the smut.. is out of control. console me... because daddy i'll gladly So madly surrender these tender times With you in mind borderline insatiable.. Handle the cradle with caution... to the point of exaustion... how often they tap out.. For to have us both would coat your inner child.. gone wild.. i've met vile face to face.. how about a drink while you loosen up to think of How many ways to graze the stage of sadism I'm a master addict.. In your dominating havoc i can't match it... I Give IN.

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Date: 10/27/2013 12:38:00 AM
came back to see if you are still here...hope you did not give in...that is the easy way out
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Date: 8/15/2013 5:11:00 PM
Where have your travels led you? I was compiling some of my work and came back upon your work. I hope you are doing well.
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Date: 6/22/2013 12:29:00 PM
Never give in..
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Date: 5/6/2013 10:53:00 AM
A very dark poem but I like dark beats myself, Thats where your light really shines. Thanx for sharing and the strong comments you made where others were afraid of the dark. I hope you been well Kimmy.
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Date: 3/11/2013 1:39:00 PM
I must say you definitely have a way with words. In a plethora of possible meanings, I’m still searching for the meaning of these words that catch my attention. I now wonder if I seek to find your meaning or my meaning. I have been the part of an old vicious cycle myself, hence my absence. I do enjoy your poems. I find them challenging on a traditional perspective, and also on an intellectual psychological perspective. I do also enjoy your style. Nice poem that I’m still getting a grasp on.
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Date: 3/5/2013 3:32:00 PM
nice
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Date: 3/5/2013 3:32:00 PM

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