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I Give In

Notoriously nasty..
you can have me
like that 

knives 

take me back  
over lapped
counter act 

Serenity 

You 
want
me 
to  
strut

let you cut 

oh the smut..
is out of control.

console me...  
because daddy
i'll gladly 
So madly 
surrender

these tender times
With you in mind 

borderline insatiable.. 

Handle 
the 
cradle
with 
caution... 

to the point of exaustion...

how often they tap out.. 

For to have us both 
would coat 
your inner child..

gone wild.. 

i've met vile 
face to face.. 

how about a drink
while you
loosen up to think
of

How many ways 
to graze the stage
of sadism

I'm a master addict..
In your
dominating 
havoc

i can't match it...

I 

Give 

IN.

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Richard Ferry

October 27, 2013 at 12:38 AM

came back to see if you are still here...hope you did not give in...that is the easy way out

Wayland Bunch

August 15, 2013 at 5:11 PM

Where have your travels led you? I was compiling some of my work and came back upon your work. I hope you are doing well.

Richard Ferry

June 22, 2013 at 12:29 PM

Never give in..

Timothy Jacks

May 6, 2013 at 10:53 AM

A very dark poem but I like dark beats myself, Thats where your light really shines. Thanx for sharing and the strong comments you made where others were afraid of the dark. I hope you been well Kimmy.

Wayland Bunch

March 11, 2013 at 1:39 PM

I must say you definitely have a way with words. In a plethora of possible meanings, I’m still searching for the meaning of these words that catch my attention. I now wonder if I seek to find your meaning or my meaning. I have been the part of an old vicious cycle myself, hence my absence. I do enjoy your poems. I find them challenging on a traditional perspective, and also on an intellectual psychological perspective. I do also enjoy your style. Nice poem that I’m still getting a grasp on.