Notes About The Poem

I Gave It My All

dreams
decapitated

damsel in
deadlock

disappointed
disillusioned

will dust off
try again



AP: Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 2:36 AM
You captured me and I kept reading and rereading; a favorite for me, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 8:47 AM
Thank you so much, Caren ~
Lindley Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 7:14 AM
Short sweet and a sign of dedication and purpose. Never give up, life demands persistence and a can do attitude. Afav...... .God bless.
Gauthier Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 7:39 AM
Thanks, Robert. Most appreciated ~
Cunningham Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 4:53 AM
Love the message Line, never give up, it will be worth it in the end Tom
Gauthier Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 11:06 PM
Thanks, Tom ~
Wolf Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 11:20 PM
If at first,... That's the attitude, my friend! Just love it. Thanks, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 11:44 PM
try try again ~
Mcguire Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:49 PM
Cant keep a strong woman down!
Gauthier Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 11:41 PM
LOL good one, Timothy ~
Kaufman Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 5:03 PM
imagery is very good..love those d's..glad she can still "dust off"..
Gauthier Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 9:48 PM
Thanks, Nancy. Much appreciated ~
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