I Gasp

I gasp

Morning is cold.
I outstretch my arm in empty reach.
I gasp.

I listen for the miracle: the shower
door closing behind him.
I gasp.
 
I wait for my toweled Rodin and
the whistling kettle.
I gasp.

I’m not sure if can get up today.
My breath returns and I robotically rise,
Gasping. 


Kathryn M. Collins©
revised Nov. 15, 2013
(would have been our 44th anniversary)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Breidenthal Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 12:45 AM
What a poem! I'm in awe. Life is filled with little surprises, among bigger ones, --or so I've heard. I'm only beginning to understand that- incredible lines that stick with you. :) Always, Laura
Ligon Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 9:28 PM
(Would have been your 44th anniversary?) Is this about struggling yo exist after deep loss of your loved one? I could sense the real pain here even before I read that little note. So sorry about your loss. : (
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November 25, 2013 at 3:30 PM
awww, sad write, Kathy - hope the day wasn't as painful as expected x
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