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I Gambled My Car

We played rummy, and we played gin. I was doing well for the shape I’m in. We played in the car, we played in the house. Over my foot ran a strange little mouse. Why didn’t you get it? My husband asked me. I was too busy, as you can plainly see. I gambled my car and other things too. Husband got silent as he lost his good shoe. We were now playing poker, husband and me. We are ahead, I announced expectantly. I overbid. We lost our sweet house. So now it’s their problem, that strange little mouse.

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Date: 12/14/2019 11:12:00 AM
Nicely done.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/14/2019 9:35:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by Robert.
Date: 12/11/2019 6:14:00 PM
Another good one. God bless you.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/12/2019 2:14:00 AM
Thank you Pratap. Bless you also my friend!
Date: 12/8/2019 12:55:00 PM
Good to foist our problems off on a mouse. Mice certainly create enough problems for us! Mouse-trapper Gershon
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/9/2019 2:51:00 AM
I hate to write about mice. The last time I did my husband saw one - inside.
Date: 12/8/2019 7:25:00 AM
Oh this is quite humorous! Husband got silent as he lost his good “shoe”
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/8/2019 7:32:00 AM
Yes, it was the LEFT one. Smirk. Smirk.
Date: 12/8/2019 2:05:00 AM
#We were now playing poker, husband and me.# lol... Nice one..
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/8/2019 2:37:00 AM
Thank you. When I get on a "tear" I just go with it. This was one of those.

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