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I Found Her Heartbroken

I found her spirit heartbroken; she needed someone who would listen. Her hot tears made my own eyes glisten as on and on she labored, outspoken. In time, her story would in part, soak in; she wanted her baby to be christened. I found her spirit heartbroken; she needed someone who would listen. A neighbor’s harsh words had woken her to the fact, people will call this sin - do unmarried mothers deserve prison? The town gossips’ pardon would be token; I found her spirit heartbroken; she needed someone who would listen. Her story dug deep breaking my spirit. She wanted help in her sorrow, more than just someone to hear it. Someone who would find time tomorrow gathering young moms to share and borrow. Acceptance is what heals a broken heart; getting involved is a good place to start.

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Date: 8/1/2025 8:00:00 AM
Reason, congratulations on your win in my Heartbroken contest, your poem is well done, blessings ~
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Date: 7/25/2025 9:10:00 PM
A tender and empathetic piece!
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Date: 7/22/2025 9:38:00 AM
"Her story dug deep breaking my spirit. She wanted help in her sorrow, more than just someone to hear it." - Grand feeling very powerfully expressed. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/25/2025 6:42:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj for the commendation and support. We should always be sensitive to a person's trama and hurt so as to do the right thing by them in Jesus' name.
Date: 7/22/2025 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your powerful write. Love your line, "A neighbor’s harsh words had woken her to the fact," Words are very powerful. Also a wonderful ending. Have a blessed day with your win.......
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Date: 7/25/2025 6:43:00 PM
Indeed, as every poet knows so well - words are power. Glad you liked the ending. thanks for commending the piece.
Date: 7/16/2025 2:58:00 PM
Jesus would certainly encourage it, especially on a spiritual level
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Date: 7/25/2025 6:45:00 PM
Yes, He would. Churches sometimes don't go that far, they help with counseling and financial assistance and even some more personal involvement; but back away from confronting a person on a spiritual level. But Jesus would urge us to share Him with everyone we meet. Thanks, Tom.

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