Arthur Vaso Poet Light Verse

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I Found a Girlfriend

Took me the breath of all my life
A soul mate who could consume my heart wither a smile
I found that Gothic girl after dark
A little to late to consummate
I lie in waiting with a dead round smile
Empty eyes and a lot of guile
I found a girlfriend even if late
We lie together
Frigid is our state

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Sara Kendrick November 7, 2023 at 1:48 PM Well, this one is sad, scary and a little like Halloween. Creative for sure. Thanks for sharing this unique one with us. Sara K

Jan Allison April 17, 2016 at 2:05 PM Gives I died in your arms tonight total new meaning lol - great to read this again lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith April 17, 2016 at 11:42 AM lol...just read my comment below

Tim Smith April 17, 2016 at 11:41 AM lol...at least you found her

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 26, 2015 at 10:30 AM witty and funny buddy Art..:)

Andrea Dietrich February 25, 2015 at 6:02 PM YOu are a so funny, Arthur. And what a great picture to go with it!! Arthur Vaso February 25, 2015 at 9:36 PM Thank you, I did put on my best suit!!!

Arlene Smith February 25, 2015 at 4:39 PM That's what happens when we won't settle for less than perfection!! :-))) Love it!.. Hugs.. Arlene Arthur Vaso February 25, 2015 at 9:35 PM I'd settle for "breathing"

Meg Anderson February 24, 2015 at 6:37 PM Ummm Arthur... I do think you will find that beautiful girl but hopefully before you look like that. Too funny! I love it! Arthur Vaso February 25, 2015 at 9:35 PM Thanks Meg you are certainly more optimistic than I !

Paul Callus February 20, 2015 at 12:59 PM Love you black humour, Arthur; could turn out to be a bone-shattering experience! // paul Arthur Vaso February 25, 2015 at 9:33 PM LOL Paul good one!

Kelly Deschler February 18, 2015 at 10:51 PM Well, it's better late than never, as they say! I really enjoyed the dark humor of this clever write. It makes me think of the film, "The Corpse Bride"... Fantastic poem, Arthur! Arthur Vaso February 19, 2015 at 10:13 PM Thanks Kelly, thats the same line I tell my credit card companies when they come a calling!

Cherl Dunn February 18, 2015 at 8:33 AM Dear Arthur, This is a little macob amd sad my friend, the pic is great to the poem you've written though,cheri Arthur Vaso February 19, 2015 at 10:11 PM I wrote this to make people laugh, or laugh themselves to death!

Julia Ward February 17, 2015 at 8:07 AM :D I have replied to your comments on my poem, "Nutella". Soup are still not sending notifications. Arthur Vaso February 19, 2015 at 10:10 PM I think things all fixed now!!! Hopefully!

Tim Smith February 16, 2015 at 10:58 PM Habs win the Stanley Cup...this is a test..if they actually would have won the world would have ended Arthur Vaso February 19, 2015 at 10:09 PM The world will survive for another year then! LOL

Jan Allison February 16, 2015 at 12:39 PM This made me giggle Arthur - this gives the saying 'romance is dead' a whole new meaning:-( Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Arthur Vaso February 19, 2015 at 10:09 PM LOL Jan, thanks!