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Took me the breath of all my life A soul mate who could consume my heart wither a smile I found that Gothic girl after dark A little to late to consummate I lie in waiting with a dead round smile Empty eyes and a lot of guile I found a girlfriend even if late We lie together Frigid is our state

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/17/2016 2:05:00 PM
Gives I died in your arms tonight total new meaning lol - great to read this again lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/17/2016 11:42:00 AM
lol...just read my comment below
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Date: 4/17/2016 11:41:00 AM
lol...at least you found her
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Date: 2/26/2015 10:30:00 AM
witty and funny buddy Art..:)
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Date: 2/25/2015 6:02:00 PM
YOu are a so funny, Arthur. And what a great picture to go with it!!
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Date: 2/25/2015 9:36:00 PM
Thank you, I did put on my best suit!!!
Date: 2/25/2015 4:39:00 PM
That's what happens when we won't settle for less than perfection!! :-))) Love it!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 2/25/2015 9:35:00 PM
I'd settle for "breathing"
Date: 2/24/2015 6:37:00 PM
Ummm Arthur... I do think you will find that beautiful girl but hopefully before you look like that. Too funny! I love it!
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Date: 2/25/2015 9:35:00 PM
Thanks Meg you are certainly more optimistic than I !
Date: 2/20/2015 12:59:00 PM
Love you black humour, Arthur; could turn out to be a bone-shattering experience! // paul
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Date: 2/25/2015 9:33:00 PM
LOL Paul good one!
Date: 2/18/2015 10:51:00 PM
Well, it's better late than never, as they say! I really enjoyed the dark humor of this clever write. It makes me think of the film, "The Corpse Bride"... Fantastic poem, Arthur!
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Date: 2/19/2015 10:13:00 PM
Thanks Kelly, thats the same line I tell my credit card companies when they come a calling!
Date: 2/18/2015 8:33:00 AM
Dear Arthur, This is a little macob amd sad my friend, the pic is great to the poem you've written though,cheri
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Date: 2/19/2015 10:11:00 PM
I wrote this to make people laugh, or laugh themselves to death!
Date: 2/17/2015 8:07:00 AM
:D I have replied to your comments on my poem, "Nutella". Soup are still not sending notifications.
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Date: 2/19/2015 10:10:00 PM
I think things all fixed now!!! Hopefully!
Date: 2/16/2015 10:58:00 PM
Habs win the Stanley Cup...this is a test..if they actually would have won the world would have ended
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Date: 2/19/2015 10:09:00 PM
The world will survive for another year then! LOL
Date: 2/16/2015 12:39:00 PM
This made me giggle Arthur - this gives the saying 'romance is dead' a whole new meaning:-( Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 2/19/2015 10:09:00 PM
LOL Jan, thanks!
Date: 2/16/2015 8:16:00 AM
You kill me man! Judging by the picture that would make us twins! Does she have a sister?
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Date: 2/20/2015 4:10:00 AM
ha ha ha love the banter :-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 2/19/2015 10:08:00 PM
Oh Richard, you are far too young and good looking to look anything like me. A sister you say? Well I might just try for her too, with the boner I now have!!!