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I Found a Girlfriend

Took me the breath of all my life
A soul mate who could consume my heart wither a smile
I found that Gothic girl after dark
A little to late to consummate
I lie in waiting with a dead round smile
Empty eyes and a lot of guile
I found a girlfriend even if late
We lie together
Frigid is our state

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Sara Kendrick Date: 11/7/2023 1:48:00 PM Well, this one is sad, scary and a little like Halloween. Creative for sure. Thanks for sharing this unique one with us. Sara K Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 4/17/2016 2:05:00 PM Gives I died in your arms tonight total new meaning lol - great to read this again lol:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 4/17/2016 11:42:00 AM lol...just read my comment below Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 4/17/2016 11:41:00 AM lol...at least you found her Login to Reply

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/26/2015 10:30:00 AM witty and funny buddy Art..:) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/25/2015 6:02:00 PM YOu are a so funny, Arthur. And what a great picture to go with it!! Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 2/25/2015 9:36:00 PM Thank you, I did put on my best suit!!!

Arlene Smith Date: 2/25/2015 4:39:00 PM That's what happens when we won't settle for less than perfection!! :-))) Love it!.. Hugs.. Arlene Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 2/25/2015 9:35:00 PM I'd settle for "breathing"

Meg Anderson Date: 2/24/2015 6:37:00 PM Ummm Arthur... I do think you will find that beautiful girl but hopefully before you look like that. Too funny! I love it! Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 2/25/2015 9:35:00 PM Thanks Meg you are certainly more optimistic than I !

Paul Callus Date: 2/20/2015 12:59:00 PM Love you black humour, Arthur; could turn out to be a bone-shattering experience! // paul Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 2/25/2015 9:33:00 PM LOL Paul good one!

Kelly Deschler Date: 2/18/2015 10:51:00 PM Well, it's better late than never, as they say! I really enjoyed the dark humor of this clever write. It makes me think of the film, "The Corpse Bride"... Fantastic poem, Arthur! Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 2/19/2015 10:13:00 PM Thanks Kelly, thats the same line I tell my credit card companies when they come a calling!

Cherl Dunn Date: 2/18/2015 8:33:00 AM Dear Arthur, This is a little macob amd sad my friend, the pic is great to the poem you've written though,cheri Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 2/19/2015 10:11:00 PM I wrote this to make people laugh, or laugh themselves to death!

Julia Ward Date: 2/17/2015 8:07:00 AM :D I have replied to your comments on my poem, "Nutella". Soup are still not sending notifications. Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 2/19/2015 10:10:00 PM I think things all fixed now!!! Hopefully!

Tim Smith Date: 2/16/2015 10:58:00 PM Habs win the Stanley Cup...this is a test..if they actually would have won the world would have ended Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 2/19/2015 10:09:00 PM The world will survive for another year then! LOL

Jan Allison Date: 2/16/2015 12:39:00 PM This made me giggle Arthur - this gives the saying 'romance is dead' a whole new meaning:-( Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 2/19/2015 10:09:00 PM LOL Jan, thanks!

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/16/2015 8:16:00 AM You kill me man! Judging by the picture that would make us twins! Does she have a sister? Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/20/2015 4:10:00 AM ha ha ha love the banter :-) Hugs Jan xxx Arthur Vaso Date: 2/19/2015 10:08:00 PM Oh Richard, you are far too young and good looking to look anything like me. A sister you say? Well I might just try for her too, with the boner I now have!!!