Mark Woods Poet Sonnet

I Forgive You

I have never felt more betrayed
Than when you lied to me
Never was I more dismayed
Than when I cut you free.

Love I sought, and not with guarantee
I never wanted this disaster
Then your flotsam and debris
Stole precious days of laughter.

No more happily ever after
I do truly understand
What is a complicated answer
I know our woe you never really planned.

I bid you a sad and firm adieu
But love absolves. I forgive you.

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 13, 2015 at 1:27 AM Wonderful poem Mark! Congrats on great win!

Skat A October 10, 2015 at 12:04 PM Mark, Congrats on your wonderful win. **SKAT** Mark Woods October 11, 2015 at 12:16 AM Thank you very much Mademoiselle Skat. I've decided I can't just call you Skat.

Michael Tor October 8, 2015 at 7:53 PM Nice deserved win Mark. Mark Woods October 11, 2015 at 12:14 AM Thank you Michael. Not sure I quite did a modern sonnet though lol

Jan Allison October 8, 2015 at 5:02 PM Very touching write Mark - I totally rewrote my original poem as I too was confused by the slant rhyme format - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx Mark Woods October 9, 2015 at 4:10 AM Thank you Jan. It relates to an earlier poem I wrote, and sometimes you put your head up high and carry on with life. Kim's poem was a wonderful theme on forgiveness that sums it up,

Adri Dew October 5, 2015 at 5:06 AM Very heart touching and courageous. Loved it Adri Dew October 5, 2015 at 12:34 PM Sometimes, forgiveness is just a start to a long long journey, I wish you all the best... Mark Woods October 5, 2015 at 12:11 PM Thank you Dew, life can be complicated sometimes, and what I was trying to achieve was that forgiveness doesn't always have a happy ever after.

Laura Leiser September 25, 2015 at 8:21 PM This is a strong and well written sonnet, Mark. I am no expert in modern sonnets, but I don't see slant rhyme in your poem. If this is for the contest, he may want that. It means the end rhyme words are not exactly the same. Example: ant/font or free/fray. Not all end words need to be this way, from what I gather. Mark Woods September 25, 2015 at 8:25 PM Thank you Laura, I must admit I was unsure of what slant rhyme meant. I had intended it for the contest, but may have to reconsider, based on that.

Michael Tor September 24, 2015 at 4:18 PM Mark this is so touching. Beautiful sonnet. I agree with Emile a 7 for sure! Congratulations on this marvelous write. Mark Woods September 24, 2015 at 6:55 PM Thank you Michael, hopefully I got the flow alright, I got dragged word wise down a slightly different path to what I intended.

Emile Pinet September 24, 2015 at 12:33 PM A very well penned traditional sonnet, with emotions that wrap themselves around your words, evoking a sad feeling that pulls at the reader's heartstrings. Emile. #7 Mark Woods September 24, 2015 at 2:09 PM Emile you have such positive, encouraging pen that I truly appreciate your comments. I think you are right that this is a slightly modernised traditional sonnet.

CayCay Godwin September 24, 2015 at 9:56 AM I wish Craig had defined the syllable count and rhyme scheme because I found no clarity when I read his example. I may goggle Robert's advice below. Nonetheless, your poem is a beautiful sentiment and great expression for both heart pain and emotional forgiveness. It is a keeper ... CayCay Mark Woods September 24, 2015 at 2:04 PM CayCay it's all part of the learning journey which the poetry wagon takes us along. Though some may disagree, to write a poem that N/A's is better than to not have written one at all.

Robert Lindley September 24, 2015 at 9:31 AM http://www.sonnets.org/basicforms.htm Goggle that link. Best one for learning about the sonnet form. You sonnet was great writing my friend. A most fine read this great morn..A7 Mark Woods September 24, 2015 at 1:52 PM Cheers Robert, after reading that (which is an awesome resource) I may have a modernised one that is still more leaning towards traditional.

Miraj Raha September 24, 2015 at 8:28 AM I think this is a traditional sonnet,silent one is correct,modern one does not adheres to the abab structure.But nonetheless the sonnet was excellent and I loved the ending. Mark Woods September 24, 2015 at 1:43 PM It's such a neat learning family here and I feel my mind is being expanded all the time. Cheers for popping in

Charmaine Chircop September 24, 2015 at 7:05 AM This is sad yet so beautiful...Lovely. Mark Woods September 24, 2015 at 4:07 PM Your kind words tell me I achieved what I wanted, that forgiveness does sometimes come with sorrow. Thank you