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I Followed The Path

I followed the path because I recognised it as the path that followed me sunlight made the pebbles paler as I made them darker like a shadow I rounded a bend in the path as the path rounded the bend in my arm circling my palm, circling a lake I walked as the path, the route I was taking this 'outside' taking me as the pebbles ignored me, as the birds sang, as the ferns feathered my woes - the gnarly roots up-earthing, my sudden funny thoughts - the rays shooting between the branches I think they knew but they didn't say, just welcomed me in my time of need I think they knew the darkness in my room unfinished hobbies overwhelming time left aside, strewn and scattered sometimes pen tore through paper on an over-turned table I looked behind the path was scored, gauged by my drag as I rounded the path as the path rounded me

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Date: 9/4/2024 9:17:00 AM
You take the reader on an interesting journey Clive. Tom
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 9/4/2024 2:13:00 PM
Thanks Tom
Date: 9/4/2024 7:47:00 AM
Such interesting circling language which hopefully circles outwards into a new day and leaves old days behind. Very compelling word choices.
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 9/4/2024 2:12:00 PM
Thanks D
Date: 9/4/2024 5:45:00 AM
Interesting journey. Whatever helps, even if just a bit
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 9/4/2024 2:13:00 PM
Thanks Tom

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