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I Followed The Path

I followed the path because I recognised it
as the path that followed me
sunlight made the pebbles paler 
as I made them darker like a shadow

I rounded a bend in the path
as the path rounded the bend in my arm
circling my palm, circling a lake
I walked as the path, the route I was taking
this 'outside' taking me
as the pebbles ignored me, 
as the birds sang, as the ferns feathered

my woes - the gnarly roots up-earthing, 
my sudden funny thoughts - the rays
shooting between the branches
I think they knew

but they didn't say, just welcomed me
in my time of need
I think they knew the darkness in my room
unfinished hobbies overwhelming time
left aside, strewn and scattered
sometimes pen tore through paper
on an over-turned table

I looked behind
the path was scored, gauged by my drag
as I rounded the path
as the path rounded me



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Date: 9/4/2024 9:17:00 AM
You take the reader on an interesting journey Clive. Tom
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 9/4/2024 2:13:00 PM
Thanks Tom
Date: 9/4/2024 5:45:00 AM
Interesting journey. Whatever helps, even if just a bit
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 9/4/2024 2:13:00 PM
Thanks Tom

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