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I Focus My Eyes On Him Each Day- Spanish Huitain

(Spanish Huitain) 


Focus my eyes on Him each day 
He's always with me when in need 
Jesus is best friend I do say 
He dwells in my heart and head 
His words inspires me when read 
With me whenever I do go 
He's always there when I'm in need 
Brings joy when pain in my heart grow. 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2014



November,23,2014

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Cherl Dunn Date: 11/23/2014 10:08:00 PM Dorian your words of faith have brought a smile to my face and put a warmth of love into this old heart of mine this evening I'm glad I stopped by to read it before I head off to sleep take care my young poet, cheri Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 11/23/2014 10:33:00 PM Thank you so much for your very kind feedback you just warmed my very heart with it, my dear friend Cheryl. Xxxx D. :) love and hugs! xxxx D.

Paul Callus Date: 11/23/2014 8:06:00 AM An admirable show of faith, Dorian. You walk in excellent company! // paul Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 11/23/2014 10:36:00 PM That sure do Paul! Thank you so kindly for dropping by and all my dear friend.:) love and hugs! xxxx D.

Ken Carroll Date: 11/23/2014 12:07:00 AM Wonderful spirit filled write Dorian! Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 11/23/2014 10:38:00 PM Thank you my good friend Ken! Much appreciate your kind comment! :) Love and light! xxxx D.

Terrell Martin Date: 11/22/2014 7:20:00 PM I have to agree with "Gnik" below...it's obvious your faith is far greater than the tiny mustard seed but more like a giant oak tree! Nicely penned poem and I'm certain the Lord is smiling because of it. By the way, what's a "Huitain"? Cheers, Terry Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 11/23/2014 10:41:00 PM Hope you're right Terrell! Thank you my dear friend for wonderful feedback. Have a great week! :) Love and hugs! xxx D

Nehpets Gnik Date: 11/22/2014 11:03:00 AM Very profound indeed. Words that inspire, full of faith. I wish I was a stronger believer like you are. A well written poem. Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 11/23/2014 10:43:00 PM Thank you my dear friend Nehpets! Most kind of you!:) Love and hugs! xxx D.