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Together forever, at cost It is time I knew why all’s lost As one we were, so calm, so gay Then destroyed, our loyalty tossed If only you’d loved her that way Melody’s heart crushed, she your prey Even gone, her longing hasn't seized Thy furtive spell lingers today Crushing life from her, you it pleased As she shed tears, sorrow released This doom that I now feel took her Enraging jealousy unleashed Familiar path, a smell of myrrh I run away knowingly sure You made hell a realization Bound to eternal void we were We looked East, my recollection The morning star’s emanation Will give powers, you promised three Where’s thy cure and salutation? Written 5/30/22 Rubaiyat Contest Hosted by Sotto Poet Honorable Mention

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Date: 6/14/2022 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Powerful" write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
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I Am Anaya
Date: 6/14/2022 12:44:00 PM
Thank you, Paula for your kind words and congratulations, you have a wonderful day! God bless
Date: 6/14/2022 1:13:00 AM
Congratulations on a well-written Rubaiyat poem my dear frined Anaya. A tough form for me but you did it amazingly. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed. God bless. Hugs
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I Am Anaya
Date: 6/14/2022 12:54:00 PM
Thank you so kindly, Len. I am so proud to make the list and am delighted that you enjoyed! Hugs
Date: 6/13/2022 8:27:00 PM
"You made hell a realization" - Great! Whole poem is beautiful. Congratulations!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 6/14/2022 12:46:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj, that is what was on my mind, Thanks again! So glad for your visit.
Date: 6/2/2022 8:58:00 PM
An intriguing, cast of lovers-- Manajatwa. Good luck Anaya! Robert
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I Am Anaya
Date: 6/5/2022 2:20:00 PM
You captured all the exotic intrigue; you understand the essence. Thank you for your visit, Robert. :)

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