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Honorable Mention

I Flee From Thy Spell

Together forever, at cost
It is time I knew why all’s lost
As one we were, so calm, so gay
Then destroyed, our loyalty tossed                                                        

If only you’d loved her that way
Melody’s heart crushed, she your prey
Even gone, her longing hasn't seized     
Thy furtive spell lingers today

Crushing life from her, you it pleased
As she shed tears, sorrow released
This doom that I now feel took her
Enraging jealousy unleashed

Familiar path, a smell of myrrh
I run away knowingly sure
You made hell a realization
Bound to eternal void we were

We looked East, my recollection                                           
The morning star’s emanation
Will give powers, you promised three
Where’s thy cure and salutation?
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Goldsmith Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 10:05 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Powerful" write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
Anaya Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 12:44 PM
Thank you, Paula for your kind words and congratulations, you have a wonderful day! God bless
Gasun Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 1:13 AM
Congratulations on a well-written Rubaiyat poem my dear frined Anaya. A tough form for me but you did it amazingly. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed. God bless. Hugs
Anaya Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 12:54 PM
Thank you so kindly, Len. I am so proud to make the list and am delighted that you enjoyed! Hugs
Alex Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 8:27 PM
"You made hell a realization" - Great! Whole poem is beautiful. Congratulations!
Anaya Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 12:46 PM
Thank you, Christuraj, that is what was on my mind, Thanks again! So glad for your visit.
Gorelick Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 8:58 PM
An intriguing, cast of lovers-- Manajatwa. Good luck Anaya! Robert
Anaya Avatar
June 5, 2022 at 2:20 PM
You captured all the exotic intrigue; you understand the essence. Thank you for your visit, Robert. :)
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