Constance La France Poet Rhyme

I Fell Into Eyes of Gray

I met him at the coffee shop one day,
he asked to join me-   and I said okay;
as he talked I fell into eyes of gray,
he was handsome and his voice was hypnotic.
     He said-   I was erotic,
     his hand touching mine I did not reject;
       but did not know what to expect.
          We went for a long walk,
            for hours did talk;
                                   and like a hawk,
          his lips were on mine in an aching kiss.
             I was suspended then twirling with bliss,
then falling in a fathomless abyss.
                                   We parted-  smiled,
both, knowing our loving would be wild.

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October 18, 2018


Poetry/Rhyme/I Fell Into Eyes of Gray
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1072-448-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Tell Me A Story
sponsor, Brenda Chiri

Sixth Place

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DM Babbit January 30, 2019 at 10:00 AM Ohhh, so passionate. Congrats on your well deserved placing. Constance La France January 30, 2019 at 6:26 PM DM, thanks for visiting my poem and the the congrats ~

Constance La France November 9, 2018 at 2:47 PM Thank you Brenda for the contest and for my placement ~

Constance La France October 19, 2018 at 6:05 PM Chris, Winged, Victor, John, and ML, thank you so much for visiting my poem and commenting on it, I will keep gray cause well I like how it goes with day and okay !

M. L. Kiser October 19, 2018 at 12:07 PM Very nice; beautifully romantic and somewhat soothing to read. Well done.

John Gondolf October 19, 2018 at 10:51 AM Ohh, I like this, Constance, both erotic and wild... Best of luck. John

Winged Warrior October 18, 2018 at 7:01 PM You can use both my friend, grey or gray...depending on how you feel...loved your passionate write...love & light...^WW^

Chris Green October 18, 2018 at 4:23 PM This was gorgeous, filled with deep love and passion. Really nicely done. Best of luck in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich October 18, 2018 at 4:01 PM ooh la la la. I really love this one!!! Cool grey eyes!! Constance La France October 18, 2018 at 4:04 PM Andrea, thanks so much for visiting, grey or gray which is correct ?