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I Fell Into Eyes of Gray

I met him at the coffee shop one day, he asked to join me- and I said okay; as he talked I fell into eyes of gray, he was handsome and his voice was hypnotic. He said- I was erotic, his hand touching mine I did not reject; but did not know what to expect. We went for a long walk, for hours did talk; and like a hawk, his lips were on mine in an aching kiss. I was suspended then twirling with bliss, then falling in a fathomless abyss. We parted- smiled, both, knowing our loving would be wild. _________________________________ October 18, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/I Fell Into Eyes of Gray Copyright Protected, ID 18-1072-448-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Tell Me A Story sponsor, Brenda Chiri Sixth Place

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Date: 1/30/2019 10:00:00 AM
Ohhh, so passionate. Congrats on your well deserved placing.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/30/2019 6:26:00 PM
DM, thanks for visiting my poem and the the congrats ~
Date: 11/9/2018 2:47:00 PM
Thank you Brenda for the contest and for my placement ~
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Date: 10/19/2018 6:05:00 PM
Chris, Winged, Victor, John, and ML, thank you so much for visiting my poem and commenting on it, I will keep gray cause well I like how it goes with day and okay !
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Date: 10/19/2018 12:07:00 PM
Very nice; beautifully romantic and somewhat soothing to read. Well done.
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Date: 10/19/2018 10:51:00 AM
Ohh, I like this, Constance, both erotic and wild... Best of luck. John
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Date: 10/18/2018 7:01:00 PM
You can use both my friend, grey or gray...depending on how you feel...loved your passionate write...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 10/18/2018 4:23:00 PM
This was gorgeous, filled with deep love and passion. Really nicely done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/18/2018 4:01:00 PM
ooh la la la. I really love this one!!! Cool grey eyes!!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/18/2018 4:04:00 PM
Andrea, thanks so much for visiting, grey or gray which is correct ?

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