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I Feel Its Ending Soon

everything is hurting now, breaking me apart, a day ago it was perfect, just like from the start, 2 years one month 3 weeks 4 days over in a haze, i thought it was all just right, i realized i'm all wrong my happyness has fled, the fat lady has sung her song, i know im not one to give up easy but now i say good-bye, to the boy i'll always love and the tears ill always cry.

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Date: 4/16/2016 5:04:00 PM
brianna cerrillo, Nice to read your poem today. enjoyed ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/20/2010 5:41:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Brianna. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/18/2010 9:03:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. continue sharing your creative writes with us ll..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/18/2010 8:28:00 PM
very nice Write indeed. I love reading poetry full of emotion, it really takes you inside of the mind who wrote it. i see a person full of self expression and i cant wait to read more of your poems. a great first contribution to poetry soup. keep the pen to the paper, please. -joe
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Date: 1/18/2010 8:25:00 PM
Wonderfully penned, soft ache. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 1/18/2010 6:54:00 PM
dont worry, plenty more fish in the sea.....nice write!
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