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I Feel Fresh Doubt

I wrote a limerick last night, And dreading that no reader laughed, I sulk and feel compelled to write What lures me to this poet-craft. And dreading that no reader laughed, I'll jot this pantoum to explain What lures me to this poet-craft ... Pantoums, I find, are pleasure's bane ... I'll jot this pantoum to explain I love to write, but feel fresh doubt (Pantoums, I find, are pleasure's bane) So from this craft I must bail out? I love to write, but feel fresh doubt Because pantoum schemes drive me mad So from this craft I must bail out-- That one small fact sure makes me glad. Because pantoum schemes drive me mad I sulk and feel compelled to write That one small fact sure makes me glad: I wrote a limerick last night! December 2, 2022 Pantoum on Writing Poetry Contest L Milton Hankins, sponsor

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Date: 1/31/2023 1:36:00 PM
As I was reading this one, I thought of Milton and oh my heart…this was written for his contest <3
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David Bose
Date: 2/1/2023 5:39:00 AM
I know how you feel ... while recycling this for Julia's contest I remember being stunned reading the sad news about Milton. Well, thanks for the read and all your comments.
Date: 12/6/2022 8:00:00 AM
Oh how well this flows and is in perfect form David I love it. Clever, succinct, and your limericks are infectious! A great entry sure to place high. laughing all the way... :)) Linda
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Date: 12/7/2022 5:15:00 AM
I'm relieved to know you laughed, Linda, otherwise I'd be sulking with worry ... thanks for your kind comments about it. I truly wondered, once I'd started the pantoum, whether it was worth the frustration and effort. But you make it so. Thank you.

Book: Shattered Sighs