I Feel Cursed

(15/08/2011)

I played a game that took my happiness
I feel numb inside and taste bitterness
I know now you bow to another vow
I‘ve thrown deep into karma law

Why did I let you go years before?
Stupidity is my another factor
Lack of wise is the first
Now I see you with her, I feel cursed!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/30/2011 8:19:00 PM
I can totally relate to this Dinda! never even had the chance to let him go, my curse is I'm just so freaking awkward when I fall in Love >,<
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Date: 12/13/2011 12:26:00 PM
the sadness is such a bitter pill to swalow. Part of the human experience I guess. We sure love to write poems about it though.
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Date: 8/16/2011 8:53:00 AM
I am so thrilled by the poetry I am reading this morning. Looks like everyone has found a pipeline to inspiration. This is wonderful and I am so happy your poetry is right here in this mix Dinda. Thank you so much for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2011 12:33:00 AM
Hi, Dinda. I like the way you began this poem with the line about playing a game that took your happiness. IT makes me curious what you did!
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Date: 8/15/2011 7:09:00 PM
great pen
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Date: 8/15/2011 6:56:00 PM
or just not meant to be Dinda.. luv is like that too luv.. and like the karma reference .. it is a factor ..for us earthlings...luv.. congrats on your collab with Michael ..
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Date: 8/15/2011 5:15:00 PM
Not cursed, just not meant to be,.... Thanks again for the privilege to write with you,,, your fan Michael
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Date: 8/15/2011 5:14:00 PM
Not cursed, just not meant to be,.... Thanks again for the privilege to write with you,,, your fan Michael
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Date: 8/15/2011 3:48:00 PM
very poignant laments over the forsaken love, Dinda
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