I Feel Better Already

March has just begun, yet already I tread its muddy waters
I hope, before it ends, I'll feel some ease; that's all that matters
Sometimes, unexpectedly, stress in one day gets to be alarming!
At every turn, so many buttons pressed, can be so annoying!
As for my Uncle Sam, it seems, I can never give him enough
I swear, we may need a ‘Robin Hood’ right here in this 'trough' 
Banks keep my few dollars, and use it at will... for free
Then turn around and charge me for that, plus ...their keep
Heard from a “Fair weather” friend who only calls when in need
And sadly, my Parish Priest, always busy, couldn't hear my personal grief
No, not when my time conflicted with his board meet!
That new neighbor, the loud one, has become a “pain in the butt”
He never considers that others maybe sleeping, after hours in a 'rut'   
Again, there were 'grown ups' who were fighting at a kids’ ball game
Displaying madness in the presence of watchful children...so insane!
Oh, not to forget, the driver who assumed he always has the right of way
Who after he turned, casually waived his hand, as if playing charades!
Enough said!  I feel better already..now that I’ve had my say!

~*~

For Carolyn's "March Madness" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fraser Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 8:00 AM
Many congratulation's Annalise on your win in Carloyn's "March Madness" contest....:)
Neels Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 11:06 AM
Hey there Annalise, how are you doing? I went on that trip again while reading it!! Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the contest :) love Wilma
Richards Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 9:36 AM
You had your say.....you feel better today!!!.....and you won a well deserved placement in the contest....HOORAY!! :) Congratulations, Annalise!!
Mannan Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 5:16 AM
Yes honey it does help when it is said. Hope you are better. Heartiest congrats for this victory.
Taylor Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 2:23 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Annalise. Nice going. xxxRalph
Mehta Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 2:05 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of carolyn, Annalise
Brown Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 12:05 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn's "March Madness" contest Annalise. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 11:23 AM
`Tis great to see you at the top Annalise with this worthy second place honor. Congratulations on your poem's honor. Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 7:26 AM
Congratulations Annalliese on a well written winner. Love, Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 7:11 AM
An awesome poem on stress and the way it makes us feel better to write (or even talk) about it, Annalise. Congratulations on your second-place win! Love, Carolyn
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March 7, 2011 at 6:18 PM
Good luck in the contest and thanks for the always kind words. Vince
Neels Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 1:39 PM
You took me with you on this roller coaster ride Annalise, all the best for Carolyn's contest :) love Wilma
Brown Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 11:31 AM
The weekend is here and I am trying to get some poetry read. I am glad you had something new here for me to enjoy today Annalise. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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March 3, 2011 at 9:02 PM
Don't you just wish those fair weather friends would be there when you need them? It's nice to know there are some we can count on though. Thanks for supporting the contest with this witty write, Annalise! Love, Carolyn
Konos Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 6:30 PM
After reading this twice, I feel better too! The driver and the right of way was just too much....lol Thank you....
Richards Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 5:48 PM
These everyday rituals that add to the madness of our lives....perfectly described in this wonderful entry for Carolyn's contest!! No wonder we get a little crazy, and need a calgon bath every once in awhile!! Well done, Annalise...good luck!!
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