I Feel

"Always thought of myself as a top of the food chain type of guy but lately I'm stuck on the bottom" In the pitch of night I wander foraging the inner workings of the mind life hasn't been too kind lately but what is one to expect I feel not at ease as I reach out to touch each appendage kicking back as the pain explains what is wrong and and what is right Fresh wounds fillet my soul and I'm vulnerable but not scared fear's not what I fear Some scars are abraded as I try to naw off the weak the dismembered, the cancerous cells calling me over and over I will not heed their message but they won't stop as I limp onward not knowing or caring what will hit me next
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 6/29/2018 7:00:00 PM
Oh goodness, the empathetic in me feels every feeling of pain there. so visual the words. hugs
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Date: 6/29/2018 7:32:00 AM
aww Tim get well my friend, with physio you will be fine ... no more limping in any aspect of your life lol:-) stay strong and keep the poems flowing:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/28/2018 9:46:00 PM
I wish you the healing that you need, dear... whatever kind that may be
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Date: 6/28/2018 3:04:00 PM
Tim, This is what "soul depression" sounds like. It's horrible, terminal, and unending. But with hope gone, so is fear and care! I pray this is a fiction write!
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