I Fall For This Payday

A dropper of winsome Fall
in my cat-eye irises.
I fall for this payday of
solitude and promise.

God’s mercy and grace
in the Southern places
of my soul, playfully sourced -
Autumn in living color.

I saunter the shadows of treetops,
burns of yellows and reds -
sardonyx swirls of prose
amidst the evergreens.

A cool cat on the prowl,
not seeking a victim,
but relationship in this season
with open arms, ready

for blessings like raindrops,
showers from head to toe,
a sea of leaves to sink the teeth
into - life’s ebb and flow.

9/28/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kauffman Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 9:43 AM
Kim, this poem overflows with beautiful fall images as you saunter through the glory of God's magnificent season named autumn. Each line has a gem to ponder. Congratulations on your win. Blessings of the season to you.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 11:44 AM
Thank you, Sam! :)
Rose  Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 4:13 AM
this was the most creative of them all congrats dear Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 4:42 AM
Thank you, Rose!
Alex Avatar
September 29, 2022 at 10:49 PM
"payday of solitude and promise" - Great writing. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 4:43 AM
Thank you, Christuraj! :)
Rose  Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 5:34 PM
ah, you not only fall into this pay day but you deserve it too dear Kim. Full of color and vibrancy, your signature dear poet. thank you for sharing the beauty. :) congrats !
Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2022 at 4:39 AM
Thank you so much, Rose <3
Wolf Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 5:30 PM
Quite a 'payday,' Kim. Quite a memorable poem. :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2022 at 4:38 AM
Thank you, Gershon! <3
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 10:10 AM
- Lovely written ... I can see it ... - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 11:04 AM
Thank you, sweet one!
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