I Fade

Effortless I fade It's not as hard as I thought Don't think about it Don't hold onto the fabric Let it slip through your fingers

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Tara Jennings

Date: 10/26/2010 9:09:00 PM

When I think about falling apart I find it frantic and suffocating, but here I find a restful peace in letting go.

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/17/2010 6:47:00 AM

love this. I wrote a poem called fade - you are inspiring me to post it. thank you Paula for the great honor of placing so high in your contest. made my day. the energy and effort it takes to sponsor a contest is so appreciated. all the best. love, shar

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/15/2010 7:42:00 PM

A n impressive thought nicely expressed, Paula