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I Dunno

Motionless as time fleets, finding a purpose to grow, sewn my heart tight, for too long,

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2023 11:21:00 AM

i enjoyed this one. Congrats in the contest

Silent One

Date: 10/15/2023 8:47:00 AM

A one liner is supposed to be on one line, dear... next time pay attention :) Congratulations on your win in the contest.

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 10/15/2023 10:29:00 AM

Awwwn thank u for choosing my piece brothaaaa…. Aye aye ayaaaaa what to do???. I have attention problem!!!! Definitely attention deficiency I have some sort of!!!! Not my bad!!! My brain did that to me !!!!

Bill Baker

Date: 10/13/2023 3:50:00 PM

Only the stitches can hold it inside and you have the power to pull them out and let the poetry flow, Lioness. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/12/2023 6:39:00 AM

A good contemplative write. Hopefully they are dissolving sutures.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/12/2023 2:21:00 AM

Awwn papi u dunno? Y does it sound like something u would say. Haha! Funny. But so poignant, unstitch those sewn stitches and let it bleed and let us all see the colors within you! Motionless a feeling one feels when confused often. You’ve written very well for silent ones contest! Nailed it! Didnt you! Love this

Tom Woody

Date: 10/11/2023 6:09:00 AM

Time to remove those limiting stitches and soar! Surgery not required, just a big leap to start