I Dunno

Motionless as time fleets, 
finding a purpose to grow, 
sewn my heart tight,
for too long,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 11:21 AM
i enjoyed this one. Congrats in the contest
One Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 8:47 AM
A one liner is supposed to be on one line, dear... next time pay attention :) Congratulations on your win in the contest.
Onpaper Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 10:29 AM
Awwwn thank u for choosing my piece brothaaaa…. Aye aye ayaaaaa what to do???. I have attention problem!!!! Definitely attention deficiency I have some sort of!!!! Not my bad!!! My brain did that to me !!!!
Baker Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 3:50 PM
Only the stitches can hold it inside and you have the power to pull them out and let the poetry flow, Lioness. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Lamoureux Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 6:39 AM
A good contemplative write. Hopefully they are dissolving sutures.
Empress Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 2:21 AM
Awwn papi u dunno? Y does it sound like something u would say. Haha! Funny. But so poignant, unstitch those sewn stitches and let it bleed and let us all see the colors within you! Motionless a feeling one feels when confused often. You’ve written very well for silent ones contest! Nailed it! Didnt you! Love this
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