Vladislav Raven Poet Curtal Sonnet

I Drown Within Your Most Beautiful Eyes - Valentine Collection

(Valentine's Collection)

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I drown within your most beautiful eyes,
through wonderful visions of precious love.
What visions I shall come to visualised,
come my beloved to Heaven above.
Sapphire eyes do become my paradise,
I now join your dreams, my beautiful dove.

I now swim within your lagoons of blue,
entranced by the blue sheen shining love-light,
Ever I see the glory that is you.
I lose myself in your eyes shining bright,
you are my delight.

10/02/2019.

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Jennifer Proxenos March 30, 2019 at 2:19 PM Your gentle humbleness and love for life and love is so powerful and evident in your poems Mike - wonderful writes, all of your poetry! Hugs, Jenny.

Okonkwo Ifeanyichukwu March 30, 2019 at 1:31 PM A delight some poem Mike, love is the actual language that can keep all minds happy..

Robert Lindley March 3, 2019 at 9:20 AM Great poetry my dear friend. In my youth I often drowned in the eyes of those I had loving relationship with. A poet's heart rules in such matters. Truly enjoyed this well crafted romantic piece.. A fav..

Charles Messina February 11, 2019 at 8:52 AM Wow, Mike. What a beautiful collection of Valentine's sonnets you have penned. I have read quite a few of your amazing poems. Great pen my friend. Have a great week...Charlie Vladislav Raven February 23, 2019 at 10:23 AM Hi Charles, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am glad you the piece. I thought it would be easier to write this Sonnet the way the form is set out but it was the opposite. I always went onto the Sonnet. Finally got there though. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike

Heidi Sands February 10, 2019 at 6:06 PM This is so bright and beautiful. I enjoyed it :) Vladislav Raven February 11, 2019 at 6:40 AM Hi Heidi, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. What joy to drown within a pair of beautiful eyes. So happy you enjoyed the read Heidi. The heart is still singing. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Carolyn Devonshire February 10, 2019 at 3:50 PM How wonderful it is to drown in a loved one's beautiful eyes, Vladislav! Your Valentine's collection would uplift hearts on any day of the year. Hugs for you, Carolyn Vladislav Raven February 11, 2019 at 6:28 AM Hi Carolyn, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. It is wonderful indeed to drown within a beautiful pair of eyes. Glad you are enjoying the collection Carolyn. The heart is still singing. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Vladislav Raven February 10, 2019 at 2:15 PM I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. Hugs....Mike. XX