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I Dreamt of You Or Was It Your Whisper

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I dreamt of you last night. Or were you whispering to me? Musty mist swirled around, Feverish fog muddled my vision. In panic, I dreamt I could not find you. I searched into the labyrinth of my mind, Where spectral haze impeded me. I combed the place and crawled, To the center of a mighty solid maze And found that I was utterly lost. Why can’t I hear your loving whispers? Then, in a faint sliver of a wan moon ray, I thought I caught a chimerical glimpse of you, Head shaven, opaquely dressed In a dark yellow caustic gown. Inexplicably the light went out and you were gone. Happiness was so easily accessible to me, But I spurned all favorable occasions. I turned my back to your silken caresses, I ignored your passionate kisses. Yet you still whispered sweet nothings to me. And now I search for the inaccessible. I search for what my soul yearns. Why do I limp with blazing eyes? Why do I lament what I have lost? Yes, I dreamt of you last night. And then I woke, covered in sweat, Trembling with fear, you were near me Whispering comfort, soothing my hair, Showering inexhaustible ardor, Caressing with your gentle hands, Drowning me in ecstasy, in abundant joy, Until dawn streamed its exuberant lights. 15 July 2021 WHISPERS Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Lawless Placed straight 5 out of 10

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Date: 7/28/2021 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a creative story/write. Enjoy your win with blessings.............
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Date: 7/27/2021 10:36:00 PM
A beautiful Creation. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/27/2021 1:22:00 PM
What a beauty, Victor. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/27/2021 1:16:00 PM
The picture of the hostage in the moonlight was not available to me and it does add a different flavor to the poem. Thanks for participating in the contest.
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Date: 7/19/2021 1:12:00 AM
This is so beautifully expressed my friend. She is not gone but remains by your side as long as your memories exist. A fine write. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/18/2021 10:50:00 AM
Victor, I took this journey with you and it was a visceral feeling riding the maze of whispers, emotions and images. Love it. All the best to you, Susan :)
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Date: 7/17/2021 1:53:00 PM
The one you love is never gone, they visit in your dreams from their last day on earth on. A sad though lovely write Victor… Belle
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Date: 7/17/2021 3:49:00 AM
This is how it happens "Inexplicably the light went out and you were gone." a delicate and beautiful write.
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Date: 7/16/2021 11:23:00 PM
Brilliant, Victor, you write these so beautifully:)
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Date: 7/16/2021 2:11:00 PM
WoW! Victor, This is a good entry for the contest. You held my attention from the beginning until the very end. You showcased the contest them well. So glad it was just a dream, and your beloved was there whispering words of love. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/16/2021 11:52:00 AM
The whispers of a loved one in a dream is well imagined here, and the theme is perfect for the contest. Best wishes for a win.
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Date: 7/16/2021 9:45:00 AM
Even if you are not there in the physical realm, your loved ones are constantly with you in your thoughts and dreams. Some dreams are enticing, but they are out of reach for most people. Victor, it seems that whispers are starting. Best wishes for a win!
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Date: 7/16/2021 8:22:00 AM
Nice to have family and friends to visit you in your sleep. Great write. hugs eve
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Date: 7/16/2021 5:39:00 AM
Some dreams are so appealing, yet always seem elusive. I hear the tenor of whispers throughout, Victor. Best for a win.
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Date: 7/16/2021 4:52:00 AM
Dreams can be a place where we see our loved ones and it's comforting...Delice
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Date: 7/16/2021 4:35:00 AM
In your mind and dreams they are never far from you Victor. Tom
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