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I DREAMT A DREAM

I dreamt of you sweet dreams Faceless tall and proud Approaching on your horse In the darkness of the night Visions of your gracefulness Enticing me to follow you And promise my fidelity From here on to eternity I know not your title or your name But I’ll recognize you from my dreams As I wait for you returning in the night I’ll call you Lady Death riding in the dark Submitted on February 16, 2019, for contest I DREAMED A DREAM sponsored by SILENT ONE - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 2/28/2019 7:37:00 PM
Ongratulations, Line Panagiota
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/28/2019 8:55:00 PM
Thank you, Panagiota.
Date: 2/21/2019 3:59:00 AM
- Our dreams Line, are often deep and difficult and understand - Congratulations on your winning poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/21/2019 9:50:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 2/20/2019 5:30:00 PM
I have read your dream and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 2/20/2019 7:47:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sara.
Date: 2/20/2019 3:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/20/2019 7:47:00 PM
Thanks, SO. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/20/2019 2:29:00 PM
Very nice twist at the conclusion of this very interesting take on the theme
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/20/2019 3:09:00 PM
Thanks, John. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/18/2019 5:15:00 AM
A very mindful reminder of Lady Death. What a dream. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 2/18/2019 7:27:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kai.
Date: 2/17/2019 12:46:00 PM
Very moving and thought-provoking, Line! Janice
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/17/2019 2:06:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Janice.
Date: 2/17/2019 10:12:00 AM
This reminds me of a dream I had once. This one makes me think... I appreciate your comment below about "making peace" but no hurrying... :)
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Date: 2/17/2019 2:07:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, PS. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/16/2019 8:26:00 PM
I see this; had to "fav".
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/16/2019 10:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, ML, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
Date: 2/16/2019 8:01:00 PM
You make death sound most attractive, Line! I enjoyed your poem tonight.
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Date: 2/16/2019 10:55:00 PM
Making peace with it - no rush though.
Date: 2/16/2019 4:08:00 PM
Line, this sounds like a past-life dream. Have you had it or something similar more than once? Your poem is intriguing and well written. Wishing you success in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 2/16/2019 4:22:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Carolyn.