Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

I Dreamt a Dream

I dreamt of you sweet dreams
Faceless tall and proud
Approaching on your horse
In the darkness of the night

Visions of your gracefulness
Enticing me to follow you
And promise my fidelity
From here on to eternity

I know not your title or your name
But I’ll recognize you from my dreams
As I wait for you returning in the night
I’ll call you Lady Death riding in the dark



AP: 2nd place 2021

Submitted on February 16, 2019 for contest I DREAMED A DREAM sponsored by SILENT ONE  -  RANKED 3RD

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Panagiota Romios February 28, 2019 at 7:37 PM Ongratulations, Line Panagiota Line Gauthier February 28, 2019 at 8:55 PM Thank you, Panagiota.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 21, 2019 at 3:59 AM - Our dreams Line, are often deep and difficult and understand - Congratulations on your winning poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Line Gauthier February 21, 2019 at 9:50 AM Thank you, Sunshine, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Sara Kendrick February 20, 2019 at 5:30 PM I have read your dream and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara Line Gauthier February 20, 2019 at 7:47 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sara.

Silent One February 20, 2019 at 3:16 PM Congratulations on your placement in the contest... Line Gauthier February 20, 2019 at 7:47 PM Thanks, SO. Most appreciated.

John Lawless February 20, 2019 at 2:29 PM Very nice twist at the conclusion of this very interesting take on the theme Line Gauthier February 20, 2019 at 3:09 PM Thanks, John. Much appreciated.

Kai Michael Neumann February 18, 2019 at 5:15 AM A very mindful reminder of Lady Death. What a dream. Kind wishes, Kai Line Gauthier February 18, 2019 at 7:27 AM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kai.

Janice Canerdy February 17, 2019 at 12:46 PM Very moving and thought-provoking, Line! Janice Line Gauthier February 17, 2019 at 2:06 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Janice.

P.S. Awtry February 17, 2019 at 10:12 AM This reminds me of a dream I had once. This one makes me think... I appreciate your comment below about "making peace" but no hurrying... :) Line Gauthier February 17, 2019 at 2:07 PM Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, PS. Most appreciated.

M. L. Kiser February 16, 2019 at 8:26 PM I see this; had to "fav". Line Gauthier February 16, 2019 at 10:54 PM Thank you so much, ML, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.

Andrea Dietrich February 16, 2019 at 8:01 PM You make death sound most attractive, Line! I enjoyed your poem tonight. Line Gauthier February 16, 2019 at 10:55 PM Making peace with it - no rush though.

Carolyn Devonshire February 16, 2019 at 4:08 PM Line, this sounds like a past-life dream. Have you had it or something similar more than once? Your poem is intriguing and well written. Wishing you success in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn Line Gauthier February 16, 2019 at 4:22 PM Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Carolyn.