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I Dreamed a Dream a Dream of Sacrifice

I dreamed a dream, of Him,
kneeling in a verdant garden,
only he could nurture.
A place of peace and pardon.

     He gazes, locked favoring heaven,
sorrow steals his sight and soul,
whilst darkness hardens.

     I witness in fear, whilst he bled
from severe innumerable laceration on his flesh.
A scarlet robe and woven crown, 
a difficult heavy cross for him to bear.

    Through shameful tears, to gather near and meet,
walked close, knelt at his feet.

2/18/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Vines Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 2:28 PM
Great inspiring write. Beautiful as well as spiritual. Keep on sharing your Faith based poetry...
Smith Avatar
February 22, 2019 at 5:13 AM
A lovely poem Eve, congrats. :)
Andresen Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 3:40 AM
- Hold on to your dreams and follow your heart, dear Eve :) - Congratulations on your winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 5:19 PM
I have read your dream and wanted to say congrats on your win .I like the faith based work...Way to go.. Sara
One Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 2:40 PM
IT was a grear sacrifice Eve... Nice spiritual take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
Rodrigues Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 9:27 AM
Wow! Just beautiful, Eve! He is worthy of our praise!
Ashley Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 8:30 PM
Powerful and moving poetry, Eve. Beautiful! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Onclaud Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 3:05 PM
straight from the heart, eve..i am speechless, ohh...huggs
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 9:03 AM
A beautiful, passionate piece Eve, lovely done. xomo
Sands Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 7:19 AM
Very nice. Well written :)
Pandit Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 6:58 AM
A heartfelt tribute..full of faith and worship.
Cunningham Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 5:12 AM
Reads like a prayer, well written Eve. Tom.
Vaso Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 3:56 AM
:) loss for words, beautiful
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