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I Dreamed a Dream a Dream of Sacrifice

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I dreamed a dream, of Him, kneeling in a verdant garden, only he could nurture. A place of peace and pardon. He gazes, locked favoring heaven, sorrow steals his sight and soul, whilst darkness hardens. I witness in fear, whilst he bled from severe innumerable laceration on his flesh. A scarlet robe and woven crown, a difficult heavy cross for him to bear. Through shameful tears, to gather near and meet, walked close, knelt at his feet. 2/18/2019

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Date: 2/27/2019 2:28:00 PM
Great inspiring write. Beautiful as well as spiritual. Keep on sharing your Faith based poetry...
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Date: 2/22/2019 5:13:00 AM
A lovely poem Eve, congrats. :)
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Date: 2/21/2019 3:40:00 AM
- Hold on to your dreams and follow your heart, dear Eve :) - Congratulations on your winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/20/2019 5:19:00 PM
I have read your dream and wanted to say congrats on your win .I like the faith based work...Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 2/20/2019 2:40:00 PM
IT was a grear sacrifice Eve... Nice spiritual take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Date: 2/19/2019 9:27:00 AM
Wow! Just beautiful, Eve! He is worthy of our praise!
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Date: 2/18/2019 8:30:00 PM
Powerful and moving poetry, Eve. Beautiful! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/18/2019 3:05:00 PM
straight from the heart, eve..i am speechless, ohh...huggs
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Date: 2/18/2019 9:03:00 AM
A beautiful, passionate piece Eve, lovely done. xomo
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Date: 2/18/2019 7:19:00 AM
Very nice. Well written :)
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Date: 2/18/2019 6:58:00 AM
A heartfelt tribute..full of faith and worship.
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Date: 2/18/2019 5:12:00 AM
Reads like a prayer, well written Eve. Tom.
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Date: 2/18/2019 3:56:00 AM
:) loss for words, beautiful
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