I Dreamed a Butterfly

I dreamed a butterfly in golden days when buttercups lay in the fields ablaze. It fluttered to my cheek, sweet love to bring. My heart was wont to burst and wont to sing. In breath of morn was scent of bluebell sprays. On blossomed blankets of the fields we’d laze, and into one another’s eyes we’d gaze, my love and I, as April had her fling. I dreamed a butterfly. Our bliss was as the spring, a fleeting phase, and brief’s the beauty of young lovers’ craze. As cruelly as a wasp, he left a sting - and all the lovely plans we made took wing, leaving mere memories of golden days. I dreamed a butterfly. 2/21/13
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Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 2:27 PM
An awesome poem Andrea. Beautiful symmetry in many ways.
Eastman Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 1:44 PM
A beautiful and interesting piece. Very unique. Congrats on the win.
Inman Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Beautiful piece, Andrea. Sweet and tender with a hint of melancholy.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 1:24 AM
Congrats on ur awesome poem n win Andrea!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 9:21 AM
Way to go Andrea, a lovely piece.
Sietesantos Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 10:37 PM
Oh my goodness, this is sooo lovely! The color, the imagery, the rhyming pattern all add to the amazing flavor of this outstanding piece! Totally beautiful! Congratulations on your great win, Andie! Pandita
Nayak Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 1:54 PM
Dear Andrea, , hearty congrats on ypur big win! beautiful poem!!! .....loved it:-).....love, Anu:-)
Hamilton Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 1:19 PM
love it Andrea congrats hugs 7
Rodgers Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 8:39 AM
Love the sweet and the bitter. Congrats on your win.
Lawless Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 6:11 AM
AH, the joy and pain of summer love.... congrats on the win.
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August 18, 2015 at 12:18 AM
Andrea, a beautiful poem. Congratulations on your butterfly win. SKAT love
Delaney Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 11:52 PM
Helloooo Andrea Love this poem The title drew me in and the sublime images that flowed in this poem It surely is a winner and yes surprise I have joined Poetry Soup. It is an amazing site.
Jordan Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 10:16 PM
Beautiful writing. You deserve the win. Congratulations. Jack
Patrikar Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 7:40 AM
congrats on ur win!! cute one
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March 10, 2013 at 9:13 PM
ANDREA, ~ CONGRATULATIONS in FRANCINE'S lovely "SPRING IS IN THE AIR" contest. have yourself a nice and sweet smile on me...;-) LOL...xox~ PD
May Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 11:57 AM
congrats on a great win Andrea........hugs
Dillard Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 11:51 AM
Another Dreamer I see...It's fun to float with the butterfly. Congratulations. RAY
Sister Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 12:34 AM
I love the imagery her, so beautiful. I want more
Sister Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 12:35 AM
Here not her.
Guzzi Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 3:59 PM
Ah Spring, I can't wait and hope it lingers at least a month, and doesn't go straight to I'm so hot I'm going to die LOL. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Liwayway Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 10:19 AM
Big Big Congratulations dear Andea for winning first place in this contest. you deserved it. cheers!!!!!!!!! (^_^) Maria
Poet Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 3:24 PM
Congrats on your Top win!!Love this !
Babcock Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 1:51 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrea An excellent write. love phyl
Gasun Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 10:56 AM
Many congratulations on your super win my dear friend, Andrea! This is again an excellent piece! love and big hugs, Leonora
Macfarlane Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 9:51 AM
A beautiful write and win Andrea! Big congrats! Hugs
Hunter Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 9:12 AM
A deserving win, Andrea! It was even better reading it the second time. I hope you have a great weekend!
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