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I Dream Poetry

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September 9, 2023, Placed 1st:I dream Poetry Contest, Sponsor: Ink Empress

An echo of lovesome passion, an inspiration of unborn theme, A muse hypnotic, adept at composing aspirations of my dream, Omnipresent voice of being, poetry is my love, eternal as time, Shaping expressions of mind, embellishing moments sublime. Strumming music enamored, resounding from tenor of heart, Humming chorus of life, emanating tunes lauding poetic art; Melodies I compose, musings inimitable, to her they belong, Lyrics woven in waltzing words; she’s been a refrain of my song. She is sunshine glinting my day, a shiny star glistening my night, My companion on journeys opulent, she’s been my utmost delight; Yet, the contours of her bold imagination, I cannot ever define, Neither can I restrict her freedom, nor her notions can I confine. Moody yet engaging, fondly she paints tapestries of my mind, Luring me to paradise~ metaphors, simile, cogently designed, Tiptoeing in my amorous view, enticing me with reveries anew, Softly as sun’s crimson rays, twinkle gems from morning dew. Poetry is my spring, she is my summer, she’s elixir for my soul, She’s fuchsia beauty on rosy arc of dawn, doting sights extol; Alluring, charming, she’s resplendence gold, of autumn’s show, She’s pure, snow-covered meadows, a season of falling snow.

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Smita Kulkarni

Date: 10/19/2023 12:07:00 PM

Lovely personification Vijay and it is so true for you! I loved the last stanza very much. You always have unique pieces of poetry! Congratulations!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/28/2023 3:31:00 PM

wow! I love how you personified poetry. Your imagery about 'her' is exquisite. 'She's' beautiful in all her forms. I was so engaged in your words; you're an artist in your own right. am faving this one, have a good evening, Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/18/2023 5:59:00 AM

Rich discripive piece from your soul here Vijay, a pleasure to visit your page.'

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk

Date: 9/14/2023 10:29:00 PM

Absolutely breathtaking and love the rousing energy I got from reading this poem. I guess it's because, I get it. Truly moving alluring piece that my eyes sucked up! Congratulations

Bill Baker

Date: 9/14/2023 9:52:00 PM

You are one with your poetry, Vijay. Your rhyme is excellent as always, and the rhythm is so smooth it is soothing to read your work. You're on a roll for these contest my friend. Good luck! Bill

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/12/2023 3:28:00 PM

She's so many things which represent beauty and more.Utterly romantic.

Kenisha Shines

Date: 9/12/2023 12:06:00 PM

loved every single word you have written about her.she teases ,soothes and makes us cry and smile and she is just our sunshine.For me you are a winner in this contest.Have a great day and keep smiling!

Susan Lawrence

Date: 9/12/2023 6:17:00 AM

Vijay, Your adoration of her is so beautifully painted in your gifted words for all to witness. So many wonderful passages here. A great pleasure to read ~ Yet, the contours of her bold imagination, I cannot ever define “ and Omnipresent voice of being, poetry is my love, eternal as time . There are no words to describe this magical connection and yet you have described it as you always have by opening your heart ! A fav to be read many times . Hugs to you , Susan :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/12/2023 6:12:00 AM

Vijay, this masterpiece, through vividly descriptive figures of speech, especially personification, pays a magnificent tribute to poetry! Janice

Ink Empress

Date: 9/12/2023 3:14:00 AM

Dear Vijay, this is mellifluous, the way you phrase words and how they flow in such artistic manner is truly profound. And i love your wordplay and rhymes, creating such a captivating cadence. I especially loved the line “ poetry is spring, my summer, elixir for my soul “ and how you’ve used colors is so gorgeous, and stunning. I truly enjoyed reading this. Thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS

Akkina Downing

Date: 9/11/2023 8:54:00 PM

WOW!! I can read this all day long. Vijay, just breathtaking dream. :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/11/2023 5:59:00 PM

Dear Vijay, the beauty of your ardent, appreciative imagery shines upon the poetic page like the sun! Golden verses illuminated with your splendid affectionate artistry are dreamy indeed! A rich lyrical gem! I see a fabulous win here. Warmest wishes my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/11/2023 3:39:00 PM

wow, you make it very clear that you dream poetry. Gosh, I think I recall a contest named I Dream but when I went to see its rules yesterday, it was gone. I guess that one got past me.

Silent One

Date: 9/11/2023 1:02:00 PM

This is sensational poetry and perfect rhyming here... This prompt seems perfect for a poet who's ink is like a dream and you turn it into reaity.. each stanza is full of imagery with words like twinkle gems from morning dew and she paints tapestries of my find... amazing poetry and a fave..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/11/2023 2:41:00 PM

That is so very special to read, SO--coming from a brilliant poet. Your valued remarks are much appreciated, my friend. Thank you for taking the time to write detailed comments and very special thank you for the FAVE.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/11/2023 9:56:00 AM

This is beautiful and I can see how much writing poetry means to you. I love the line, she paints tapestries of my mind. Also, I love the last stanza. This ends perfectly. A Fave for me. Hugs and smiles my friend :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/11/2023 2:38:00 PM

Glad to see you again my friend. Much appreciate your delightful remarks, Heidi, and your FAVE. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE. Hugs to you as well.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/10/2023 6:03:00 PM

Poetry is giving words a voice, emotions the chance to echo, while moments move with the melody. In that dream, I shall stay. You and your muse, have created a beautiful masterpiece, Vijay. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/11/2023 4:18:00 AM

That is so poetic a comment from a poetic soul. Stay in that dream my friend. Much appreciate your thoughtful insights, Brandy. Many thanks. Hugs to you as well.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/10/2023 10:13:00 AM

I can tell how much you immerse yourself in the music of poetry, dear Vijay! You hone your craft delightfully! Always romantic and full of imagery and wordsmithing! God bless you!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/11/2023 4:16:00 AM

Delighted to hear that my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Kim. Many thanks.

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/10/2023 9:27:00 AM

Wow! Wow! Wow! Three wows and a resounding Splendid! "Strumming music enamored, resounding from tenor of heart," as a want-to-be Pavarotti, this line immediately found my flavor. A poet's poet you are. Great writing! Blessings!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/11/2023 4:15:00 AM

So nice to hear that from the someone who lives and breathes poetry. Much appreciate your visit and your valed feedback, my friend. Many thanks, Joe.

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/10/2023 3:16:00 AM

Gosh dear Vijay this is beautiful! You never fail to amaze me with your poetic talent.Your so unique crafted words weave and flow effortlessly into a harmonious delightful sound - ‘Softly as sun’s crimsons rays, twinkle gems from morning dew.’ Sublime. Poetry flows through you with an extra heartbeat. Wonderful. Much blessings to you. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/11/2023 4:13:00 AM

So very kind of you Christina. I am glad to read your glowing remarks. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

The Situation

Date: 9/9/2023 11:15:00 PM

everythin g is beautiful, everything.. And I was reminded of my muse, your muse , everyones muse. discribed perfectly!!!! until it was incompleat. please finish so I can fav.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/11/2023 4:12:00 AM

Much appreciate your insights, Situation. I will try better next time. Many thanks.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/9/2023 4:28:00 PM

This poem, itself, is a beautiful dream, Vijay. It exudes charm and romance in every line. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/11/2023 4:11:00 AM

Much appreciate, Evelyn. Many thanks for your kind remarks, my friend.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/9/2023 1:18:00 PM

You dream beautifully, Vijay. Your poem is full of captivating words and phrases. I especially like "she paints tapestries of my mind" and "she's elixir for my soul." There's such depth to your poem. You must be a soulful person, Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/9/2023 3:52:00 PM

So nice to hear that from you, Sara. Your kind thoughts are much appreciated. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/9/2023 11:27:00 AM

Your poem is a beauty, Vijay - because poetry is in your soul! The images are stunning, shining like precious gems - "Softly as sun’s crimson rays, twinkle gems from morning dew"! Best wishes - keep writing such exquisite poems.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/9/2023 3:50:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and your kind feedback, Mala. Your support is greatly appreciated and valued.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/9/2023 7:08:00 AM

Wow wow wow, I can truly say that this is one of my favs from your artistic quill! The imageries, depth, poetic eloquence, rhymes, mellifluous flow..ah, this glistens like the brightest jewel in the most fascinating skies.. Ah, I'm just in awe of how enriched with emotions each and every line is.. "Softly as sun's crimson rays, twinkle gems from morning dew", "she's elixir of my soul" The way you dream of poetry, reflects magic! "She's fuchsia beauty on rosy arc of dawn" BEYOND GORGEOUS.. Wow!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/9/2023 10:43:00 AM

Your comments are more eloquent than my poem, Hiya. Glad you liked the poem. I am honored to receive your vote of your approval--given how fabulously talented poet you are. Honored as well to receive your FAVE. Inspired by your remarks. Many thanks.

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/9/2023 6:50:00 AM

I am always amazed by your remarkable ability to use words in such a profoundly beautiful and poetic way. It's as if you possess a magical talent to capture beauty, creating a breathtaking work of art with your incredible writing skills. You are truly an exceptional friend and poet. Your confidence never fails to inspire and motivate me. Your poetry is truly enchanting, and it has created a tapestry of elegance, charm, and passion that transports me to a captivating world. BOL in the contest

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/9/2023 10:39:00 AM

Thank you my friend for your insights. Amazing how you find the time to write detailed remarks and spread goodwill on Soup, everywhere you visit. Always a joy to read your feedback, Lasaad. Many thanks.