I Dream Poetic Lines of Love

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I Dream Poetry Contest sponsored by Ink Empress

 September 8, 2023

In dreams I linger in solitude, 
sipping a cup of contemplation,
brewed from leaves of my expectations.
Writing pages of romantic Sonnets
about plans I have for me and you.
Sometimes I'm fearful of rejection, 
spurned if you should turn away from me.

I dream of being kissed and caressed,
like the waves that fondle the sandy shore.
It's then I yearn for more hours of restless sleep, 
where I fantasize that you are the flowing tide, 
coming to sweep me off my feet.

In my poetic dreams you're only a heartbeat away.
I hear your voice call to me, or so it seems, 
as I wait for you to find me. 
where we journey in realms of ardor each night.
You fill my heart with tender emotions.
Words of devotion to you I speak in rhyme,
when upon my cheek you place a kiss.
and the silence between us is unmuted. 

I've journeyed a thousand miles in pellucid reveries,
searching to find myself in the depths of your eyes,
where passion takes root within the chasm of my soul.
I dreamed poetry would lead me to you,
and in many verses, by my pen it was foretold
that one day we would share the same dream. 

In that dream, time has no place or meaning.
Whether in the limpid lavender light of dawn,
the shadowed skies of dusk, or in the moon's luminance
among brilliant stars in an ebony night,
I listen for your footfall to cross my threshold. 

When you finally appear, I cry joyful tears.
The candle flame sputters when you breathe my name,
and beyond the veil of dreams, we tryst.
I hear two hearts speaking, the voices ours,
and 'love' is a word both hearts gladly avow.

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Date: 9/14/2023 9:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this amazing poem, really swept my heart with this piece. So romantic. Daisy
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Date: 9/15/2023 5:43:00 AM
Thank you very much, Daisy.
Date: 9/12/2023 3:58:00 PM
Lin, Congratulations on your first place win with your beautiful poem,hugs.
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Date: 9/15/2023 5:42:00 AM
Thank you ever so much, Tania.
Date: 9/12/2023 9:58:00 AM
So glad the sponsor recognised you as a talented poetess, it is evident in every poem you write Lin! Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/12/2023 10:14:00 AM
Jan, your comments always give me reason to smile, knowing you’re my friend.
Date: 9/12/2023 2:44:00 AM
Dear talented Poetess, as i read your brilliantly crafted poem , I couldn’t help but resonate with so many lines in this, woven in sheer eloquence. I absolutely love the flow and the wordplay and the way your poem fits the theme of the prompt so profoundly. Evocative and romantic. I especially loved the lines “ i dreamed poetry would lead me to you” “ in the dream time has no meaning or place” you are truly gifted and this poem is impeccable! I loved it. Thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS.
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Date: 9/12/2023 4:27:00 AM
Thank you for finding my entry to your liking, IE. I appreciate the placement and for letting me know which lines you particularly enjoyed.
Date: 9/11/2023 2:19:00 AM
A romantic one, beautiful:)
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Date: 9/11/2023 6:04:00 AM
With many thanks, Jo.
Date: 9/9/2023 4:25:00 AM
Lovely done. Lovely done. God bless you with all the love a heart can hold. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Date: 9/11/2023 6:03:00 AM
Thank you so sincerely, Gina.
Date: 9/9/2023 1:23:00 AM
Thats what you are good at Lin writing of love and beauty! A totally lovely poem.. Debx
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Date: 9/11/2023 6:03:00 AM
What sweet sentiments, Deb. Thank you.
Date: 9/8/2023 6:42:00 PM
Oh, my my! So, so romantic! Hope you are fully recovered now, Lin
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Date: 9/8/2023 7:35:00 PM
I’m so pleased you like this one, Seeker. Thank you. I am past the worst of it.
Date: 9/8/2023 3:52:00 PM
Only in my dreams i dream of writing romantic lines like this Lin:-) excellent ink:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/8/2023 3:55:00 PM
Thank you for believing in my poetry, Jan. Sometimes I think I write too many romantic verses.
Date: 9/8/2023 12:19:00 PM
Very poetic and ends in love's triumph. Great imagery throughout. A lovely poem that one loves to read again and again.
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Date: 9/8/2023 3:44:00 PM
Hi Victor and thank you very much for your kind review of my free verse poem. To read a poet’s creation more than once is quite a compliment. Hugs.
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