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I Draw the Line

There are just certain lines, that never should be crossed. They are drawn, stark and clear. To keep morals from being lost. Yet some folks dance in shadows, they live just to blur the line. They revel in the color grey, justifying it in their own mind.
For the contest Shadows and Lines Sponsored by Rick Parise Placement: 3rd

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Date: 6/27/2011 5:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Shadows and Lines" contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 3:02:00 PM
Congratulations Paula, on your 3rd place win in Ricks contest..
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Date: 6/23/2011 8:52:00 AM
Two big wins for you today, Paula. So happy for you! Congratulations, Carolyn
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Date: 6/23/2011 7:50:00 AM
An insightful write.Congrats Paula on your win .
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Date: 6/23/2011 7:23:00 AM
I love the message of the shadows and lines inspired poem!! How wonderful, all the different directions each poet has taken. Excellent!!
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Date: 6/23/2011 4:38:00 AM
special congrats on your shining win, paula... so well-scribed!:) huggs
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Date: 6/22/2011 10:20:00 PM
I LIKE this, a very profound one, Paula. congrats again!!!
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Date: 6/22/2011 7:34:00 PM
Fantastic take on the contest-Well done-congrats. to you Paula!!!
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Date: 6/22/2011 2:35:00 PM
Interesting description of those less desirable qualities - well done.
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Date: 6/22/2011 2:32:00 PM
Congrats Paula my friend on another top notch win in shadows and lines contest with this lovely entry..enjoy top billing luv..
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Date: 6/17/2011 6:58:00 PM
Great take on the contest.. I know it will be at the top. BG
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Date: 6/17/2011 4:53:00 PM
Good entry for Rick's contest, Paula. The very best of luck to you. ^__^
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