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He gives you yet another of many black eyes, but still you've chosen to stay, to weather the storm. How come? Lord knows I've seen you cry many a river over him, yet you ignore pleas to flee, to be free of his poisonous tentacles! Please explain the whys and wherefores; I don't understand it! What are you holding on to? Are you waiting for him to change magically from cad to saint? Why do you stay and take abuse? I don't understand it! We both know this isn't love It's never too late to vote with your feet! Run, poor thing, run Or at least walk away... and never look back! Clutching At Straws Poetry Contest (Winner: 8th Place) Sponsored by Kai Michael Neumann Date written: 09/09/2020

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Date: 10/6/2020 10:43:00 AM
- When love is locked in chains, Edward :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/6/2020 12:25:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)
Date: 10/6/2020 6:15:00 AM
Edward, this is terrific. I love the lines "It's never too late to vote with your feet!" Congratulations! Linda
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/6/2020 6:54:00 AM
Thank you very much, Linda:-)
Date: 10/6/2020 5:16:00 AM
A inspiration and truth inspired from above. Love this write. It's so true. God bless you always
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/6/2020 6:55:00 AM
Thanks so much, Regina:-) Blessings to you as well!
Date: 9/11/2020 7:38:00 PM
Edward, Love is so blind, and sometimes deaf. -Richard
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/12/2020 10:01:00 PM
Thanks also for the FAV!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/12/2020 10:33:00 AM
Very true, Richard:-) Thanks so much for the visit!

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