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I Don'T Think It Was Pepsi She Was Drinking

Gut wrenching
Bowel clenching
Loo stenching
Throat heaving
Sick making
Head aching
No sleeping
Mum’s waking
She’s crying
Not dying….


Tipsy!

Based on the format of the original PEPSI advert from the 1970's


08-12-17

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Anita Harris

August 18, 2017 at 12:13 PM

Good one, Jan!

Jan Allison

August 18, 2017 at 12:50 PM

CHEERS LOL:-) hugs jan xx

John Michaels

August 18, 2017 at 11:21 AM

Nice one, Jan!! Took me a moment to realise what you were talking about (it's been a long day)! Regards, John.

Jan Allison

August 18, 2017 at 12:49 PM

I don't know if you are familiar with the original Pepsi advert it used to be in the cinema before the main film was on lol:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph Soper

August 13, 2017 at 9:45 PM

Very clever Jan...

Jan Allison

August 14, 2017 at 2:30 AM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

August 13, 2017 at 8:02 PM

haha, CLEVER and great rhyming!!

Jan Allison

August 14, 2017 at 2:29 AM

Thanks Andrea - do you remember the pepsi add which went lip smacking thirst quenching etc etc and was on at the cinema before the main film?:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

August 13, 2017 at 5:21 PM

Oh....never again, especially without food in the stomach! Poor guy, if he is smart he will learn from it! I enjoyed this Jan! : )

Jan Allison

August 13, 2017 at 5:26 PM

I wrote the poem and found the pic Connie - i wonder if people remember the original pepsi advert that was played at the cinema before the main film was shown:-) hugs jan xxx

Alesia Leach

August 13, 2017 at 3:06 PM

Remember like it was yesterday, but it wasn't and never again. Great write!

Jan Allison

August 13, 2017 at 3:12 PM

Your comment made me smile I drink alcohol so rarely these days but have been drunk twice in the past and never ever again:-) hugs jan xx

Russell Sivey

August 13, 2017 at 4:29 AM

I agree with Lin and Victor, I don't think it was just Pepsi that he was drinking to get those effects! A lot of alcohol will damage you big time and this would be the after effects of it! I've never gotten drunk, and don't plan to, so I don't know exactly how that feels, but I've seen it first hand! This is a fantastic write about "Pepsi" with a little extra umph thrown in! What a grandiose piece my friend! Great Work!!

Jan Allison

August 13, 2017 at 11:17 AM

The Pepsi line is really about the commercial the poem was based on and instead of pepsi at the end I used Tipsy lol:-) I seldom drink alcohol these days and have been drunk twice and it is something I never want to experience ever again:-0 hugs jan xx

Bernard Chan

August 12, 2017 at 11:08 PM

Such a fun, engaging read!

Jan Allison

August 13, 2017 at 11:19 AM

Thanks Bernard:-) hugs jan xx

Christopher Flaherty

August 12, 2017 at 7:19 PM

Pepsi Cola No thanks mate Have yee any Coke I am Bloke And i take Jack with my Coke Tastes better throwing up I Don't drink that Pepsi muck

Christopher Flaherty

August 15, 2017 at 3:18 PM

Come to think of it Jan I cant actually remember seeing a Pepsi Add Maybe I have seen it just never noticed I like the Meercats Adds most Adds are total crap nowadays You cant even tell what they ate advertising

Jan Allison

August 13, 2017 at 11:20 AM

lol Christopher. I wonder have you ever seen the pepsi ad my poem was based on lol:-) I rarely even drink coke these days but had one yesterday with friends who are over from the US:-) hugs jan xx

Debbie Duncan

August 12, 2017 at 7:05 PM

This is cute, I don't remember this/ that from the adverts. Thank you so much for liking my Humor of tree growing out of my head. I wrote it down 2012. But I know I've said it for many years :)

Jan Allison

August 12, 2017 at 7:08 PM

If you google the Pepsi ad it started with lip smacking thirst quenching ace tasting etc so i tried to follow the form it took lol:-) hugs jan xx

Winged Warrior

August 12, 2017 at 5:00 PM

I think it was Coke Zero lol...tipsy write Jan...^WW^

Jan Allison

August 12, 2017 at 6:18 PM

lol thanks ^WW^:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 12, 2017 at 3:13 PM

- Terrible hangover ... it feels like death is near :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

August 12, 2017 at 6:35 PM

True Anne Lise and I've seen how alcohol can destroy lives and rarely drink these days I prefer a cup of tea lol:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 12, 2017 at 3:37 PM

- We were young and stupid :)))

Jan Allison

August 12, 2017 at 3:17 PM

I have got drunk twice - the last time was when my work colleagues took me out for a lunchtime drink the day before i got married I rarely drink was SO ill they had to pack me in a taxi home lol:-) hugs jan xx