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I Don'T Need You

Know that you can sleep well if I’m not right Grabbing anything to brace my border Instead of this time fixed to pick a fight Getting lost in your twisted disorder
Grabbing anything to brace my border When you carry on with your bigotry Getting lost in your twisted disorder You think it’s a joke when you laugh at me
When you carry on with your bigotry It isn’t just me who can see right through You think it’s a joke when you laugh at me I’ve nothing to prove anymore to you
It isn’t just me who can see right through My insecurity is miles away I’ve nothing to prove anymore to you I love me more today than yesterday
My insecurity is miles away I give you an earned twenty cent goodbye I love me more today than yesterday Before you bury me I have to try
I give you an earned twenty cent goodbye Instead of this time fixed to pick a fight Before you bury me I have to try Know that you can sleep well if I’m not right
5/19/2016 Musical Pantoum - 10 syllable count Favorite Band: Goldfinger Songs used: 1. If I’m Not Right 2. Anything 3. Pick a Fight 4. Disorder 5. Carry On 6. You Think It’s a Joke 7. It Isn’t Just Me 8. Nothing To Prove 9. Miles Away 10. More Today Than Yesterday 11. Twenty Cent Goodbye 12. Bury Me.

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Date: 6/16/2017 10:11:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, you should have to done alot of work before creating this poem, and really this was an excellent poem, congrats on your win however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 5/24/2017 7:13:00 PM
Oh, I see how you were doing it with the music titles! Great job, Lukas. Congrats on the winners' list!!
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 5/25/2017 11:09:00 AM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 5/22/2017 11:01:00 AM
Wow! You've accomplished quite a feat, Lukas! Congrats on your win! Janice
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 5/25/2017 11:09:00 AM
I appreciate your visit Janice thank you :)
Date: 6/15/2016 8:23:00 PM
Lukas, thank you for your visit and Congrats to you on your win in this contest! I will enjoy reading your library!
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Date: 6/15/2016 6:45:00 AM
Nicely done and congrats!
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Date: 6/14/2016 9:44:00 PM
Lukas, congratulations on your win, no an easy contest. :-) Hugs
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Date: 5/24/2016 9:02:00 AM
Excellent Pantoum, Lukas! How wonderfully you wove in all those songs to create this emotional write! I know how difficult it is. Best wishes for the contest. 7, Sandra
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