Chamonique Knowles Poet Free verse

I Dont Know

I’m full with problems
And the answers are burning
There’s obstacles on my path
And I trip on the solid ground
i keep stumbling
and i think i know whats up ahead
but i keep having to face 
new challenges i never saw coming
so i look them straight on
i may not know all the answers
i may fall down
and i may fall behind
but i will learn
and i will get back up
and i will never give in
and i will never give up

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Janette Fisher February 2, 2010 at 11:10 AM Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette

James Fraser February 1, 2010 at 1:38 PM Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James

Ann Rich February 1, 2010 at 5:34 AM Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR

Carol Sunshine Brown February 1, 2010 at 4:22 AM Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Chamonique. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Caroline Cécile Delacroix January 31, 2010 at 6:26 PM Very nice poem of determination. Quite an inspiration! Congrats on your poem being featured this week. Best wishes, Caroline.

Yoni Dvorkis January 15, 2009 at 6:55 PM If you want a suggestion: In my head, I see you doing what you did in 'escape the pain' only you don't need to actually run up to your room, just relive the experience while the obstacles are still there in front of you. One reason why I usually trip is cause I can't see what's ahead of me, or I'm dead sure I see something that's not actually there.