I Dont Know

I’m full with problems
And the answers are burning
There’s obstacles on my path
And I trip on the solid ground
i keep stumbling
and i think i know whats up ahead
but i keep having to face 
new challenges i never saw coming
so i look them straight on
i may not know all the answers
i may fall down
and i may fall behind
but i will learn
and i will get back up
and i will never give in
and i will never give up
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 2/2/2010 11:10:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 2/1/2010 1:38:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 2/1/2010 5:34:00 AM
Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Chamonique. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/31/2010 6:26:00 PM
Very nice poem of determination. Quite an inspiration! Congrats on your poem being featured this week. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/15/2009 6:55:00 PM
If you want a suggestion: In my head, I see you doing what you did in 'escape the pain' only you don't need to actually run up to your room, just relive the experience while the obstacles are still there in front of you. One reason why I usually trip is cause I can't see what's ahead of me, or I'm dead sure I see something that's not actually there.
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