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I Dont Know

I’m full with problems And the answers are burning There’s obstacles on my path And I trip on the solid ground i keep stumbling and i think i know whats up ahead but i keep having to face new challenges i never saw coming so i look them straight on i may not know all the answers i may fall down and i may fall behind but i will learn and i will get back up and i will never give in and i will never give up

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Janette Fisher

Date: 2/2/2010 11:10:00 AM

Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette

James Fraser

Date: 2/1/2010 1:38:00 PM

Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James

Ann Rich

Date: 2/1/2010 5:34:00 AM

Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/1/2010 4:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Chamonique. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 1/31/2010 6:26:00 PM

Very nice poem of determination. Quite an inspiration! Congrats on your poem being featured this week. Best wishes, Caroline.

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 1/15/2009 6:55:00 PM

If you want a suggestion: In my head, I see you doing what you did in 'escape the pain' only you don't need to actually run up to your room, just relive the experience while the obstacles are still there in front of you. One reason why I usually trip is cause I can't see what's ahead of me, or I'm dead sure I see something that's not actually there.